sin i thought your first bar was going somewhere but then u pulled a mack 10 ? meh that might have been a good line in the 90's fam its 2024 lol the Madden line had some mad potential , had some alright attempts at personals but they just wernt polished in comparison , like reaps first bar. Pretty clear winner in this one . gb fv

Rittz/writs 

For text readers: RhymeSmoke has a phrased "smoked" for when he wins

Mack 10 is a gun/rapper who is a blood

GL and GB Reaper

Expo

- sins confession : box at church 

-living statues: Crowd performers

- Sleeping beauty: Cursed/fell asleep @ 16 

one battler is on a consistently higher level of writing here. challenger wasn't bad here so much as he was outclassed. fairs in 

The skill set of the winner here was more intriguing and delivered better concepts than his opponent, the loser here was simplistic and should try incorporating edgier concepts to improve the delivery of punches. The fair is in 

Dope battle in new here just trying to get my feet wet and learn but I'll try to dive as deep as I can. 

so first off this was a very very good battle in my eyes, what seems to me to be fresh original content and both artist kept me guessing so safe to say nothing was cliche..

Fav bars of the battle I got 2 from reaper one from sin.

Reaper:

I'll have you 'afraid to speak', quit ur PLAYING GOD OBSESSION.. I ain't stopping til "Sins in a box" like I'm "MAKING A CONFESSION

I enjoyed this concept, the build up was masterful starting from the first line. Lowkey could be a movie script for a scene lol however usually people are scared to confess in general so the opening statement sets a great tone. I also like the divide and contrasting method used one moment the opponent will be scared to speak but then the next he gets birated for playing god or acting as if he is in control. And the punch tops it off nicely very smooth and to the point. This bar gets a whiskey from me. Also I'd note that yes there is a confessional however if you are scared to speak there is or used to be a box you can anonymously drop your written confession so I just think it's a clever play.

another NEWBIE SLAYED , "rolled up and eaten" like SUSHI MAINS, 8 bars TRUELY SHAMED, ain't "seeing 16, it's curtains for you" like how "Sleeping BEAUTY LAYS!"

He describes the slaying of sin in a simile where he gets rolled up and eating raw also the wordplay on ate bars truley shamed was decent. Then to top it off we have the sleeping beauty reference to describe that he ain't able to keep up with 8 bars much less 16 he'll get out to bed. Very strong performance 

Sin:

hb's' brains , is the only emcee you're MATCHING w/WITS, you cooked up something nice, BATCHING those "RITTZ", you're a noob and it's 'Madden' the way youre not CATCHING the BLITZ!

now just because I have two lines for reaper and one for sin does not mean that sin doesn't have some heat. In all honesty this line is worth 2.. I think the first line was just masterful and hilarious great way to belittle reaper. Then the play on words suggesting that reaper recycled rhymes and just groups them together in a way that shows no rhyme or reason is pretty heavy. And I think it's masterful how he kinda walks you into it in a sarcastic satirical manner. Then to top it off we have the punch line. I have not played madden in years however it's a common play in madden that and the hail Mary on offense. So he suggests that reaper just recycle rhymes and is non strategic and bland which leads to him not being able to see and read an opposing strategy where someone may be planning to put pressure on him. To he usually fumbles under pressure. Fairly good bar. Now conclusion!!

ok again both artist brought it and it was a dope read. Art is about perspective I can't like something that I don't understand in this case I enjoyed both. Reaper for his consistency and simplicity or at least simple enough for me to get it.. and sin for his intricate layers and wordplay. Now I think the confession bar from reaper was leaning me towards him however after further analysis I'm noticing that I'm gushing sins verse a little higher now. Both artist had some lines I felt were either convoluted, basic, or a little of a stretch in my opinion, however I think the verse I liked on a more consistent basis was sins. So I'll be voting for sin this time however I would imagine this battle could be fairly close to many. Great job bros.

Gotta lean toward MR here. Better punches and an overall more impactful verse. Sinister rhymed well and had some decent ideas that just needed a bit more development

I like how reaper had stuck to an act of being the grim reaper but overall the two were pretty tied

Well interesting read, Sinister you got some nice concepts in there, with the right execution they coulda landed harder. Reaper verse was cleaner and most punches landed.