Grave the first is a good concept start but diagnostics and opposites dont sit right 2gether, The syllable count jumps from 5 to 6 so it didnt flow that well. Sean Paul landed but was lite. Sasquatch sightings u could have expanded the set up to make it more relevant ( a lot of things can leave imprints ) Closer was ok but not too impactful

Reap i wasnt so sure with your choice of concept to start but it flows better , Sea Sickness was a decent land tho. memory pics also lands clean , u maintained a more direct attack and structure was way ahead here . Clear body tbf

Expo

- He lost to Hek Teafy (Teaf)

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ok i thought graveship had it with the sasquach sightings line until i read reapers sea sickness line mostly becuase it was a play off your name more direct

MR got this. He had more impactful punches and didn't really have any slip ups writing. Grave had some good ideas but the opener was a super forced rhyme. next set was way too wordy with the Beckham bit thrown in not adding anything to the bar and it's dark/light theme. The rest was better but the mistakes early made the difference.