Good effort from both, loved the start from Nflight.

Feel like DeadTris threw more punches and just stayed more consistent in every regard in general.

Fairs in 

That shit went hard bro good job nice delivery and flow and punchlines

um aight - NFlight - first one i'm checking from you. you went for long multi-syllable rhymes. it read well, but if you're capping them it needs to be more accurate imo - finsh your concepts - missing a tooth / the gum me to death was a complete concept - didn't hit hard but it was a completed thought. if you can make that thought match on beginning and end rhyme you have a punchline there. next, carving breasts out of a tree is wild - hard to really dig it when it's written that way. then you have rounds in your chest. okay, so breast / chest and two rounds should be a line imo - it's scattered but i get the idea. the rest doesn't read well - i tried man, but it just doesn't make sense. DeadTRI - structured well - less is more on the rhyme patterns and you got payoff on each concept. ngl i just realized where you from and it made better sense on the read cause some of the multis were questionable. - UK - got it. - FILE TO YA JAW is an example. thru PILED IN A DORM rhymed but didn't hit like crazy - you recovered with a long-bar to end. I got DeadTri taking this one - readability through the end of the verse. complete concepts and hard punches at the beginning. NFLight just keep it simple and you have a good framework. complete a thought per line and you're right there - good luck