Winner here had better use of similes and his approach was more aggressive and battle type approach 

Feel one had better multis and concepts also what is fell a pa? Fv as always

this was awkward. i got Kiwi taking this one. the biggest qualm i had with Hek's verse is that Kiwi is from NZ so the pikey/English shit was a huge wiff for me (conceptually) well written. you don't need 1,000 syllables to make a good punch but still, know your opponent. the ender also missed the mark. Kiwi, the opener was aight. the concepts (save the Uber i really liked that one) were creative but not executed well imo. big beneift from Hek missing the mark most of his angles. just providing some feedback for both.  i've seen vastly better from both. votes in.

Hek - I actually like your short syllable multis, and I dont think it hinders anything flow wise. You do have some bits like "he slung nikes", where "he" is not required and makes it sound off balance. Favorite bar of your verse was the Stella Bar bit, it w as clever. The majority of your other concepts were not working for me personally though, and the build ups were not practical.

Kiwi - Intro was smooth imo. Rides in rad ubers I thought was a creative concept, but the wording with "riders seein stars like giving rides" made it sound unnatural with the use of ride twice with like 9 syllables. Your last bar fell off for me flow wise, and even a tad conceptually. 

Overall - I think Kiwi edges creative concepts, punches, multie use, and even cadence/flow. Both had some low points here and there, but nice battle!

man. fuuuuck. the bars kept getting better n better. shit. 

Never read Hek's stuff before but he has a solid foundation- good multis and some decent punchlines. I think you had some concepts that if worded a little differently would've been stingers but overall I can see the talent is there. Kiwi came lighter than his normal bars, but I still feel like he was able to deliver harder hitting punches, I liked the Uber line and your closer. Good battle here fellas 

this was a nice battle from both sides. I was really liking heks verse, flow was good and had some nice punches like the stella bar line, only criticism I have for him was that the grandpa concept was a bit of a reach and didn't make much sense to me.

For Kiwi I wasn't really feeling his verse only the punchlines. It was good, but I liked hek's verse way more... still I'm giving this win to kiwi for the better punches. Fv as always

Kiwii for excetera excetera reason... ........... . .. ..... 

Hek came better, I see the growth, that Stella bar line was nice, liked the creativity. Some rhymes were a bit off but overall decent verse yo.. Kiwi did what was needed to snatch the win, the verse heated up near the end, from writing pad, tunic and the closer math tutor lines were more than enough to bag the W.. props on the battle. Kiwi took this. 

Felt that Kiwi did a little better, he had better multis