Pretty decent battle here fellas....nice punches on both sides....can easily see this going to either way. My winner has my preference of punches on this one..good job fellas

good shit bro. knew you wouldn't disappoint.

expo:

- "winning your 1's" is a phrase used in FPS games and means winning 1 on 1 gunfights

- MF DOOM always capitalized, Stro doesn't cap multis

- no-show socks

- quid pro quo- a favor or advantage granted or expected in return for something

Nice drops here fellas. Both had dope concepts, I liked the similes from my winner and the way he set up and executed his punches. Fairs in fellas 

Ice took this one. The no-show angle hit different with DS’s apology line at the beginning too. Zero down time between jabs. Ngl deathstro had some really cool concepts throughout. Just had some dead spaces that opened him up for attack.

A slight edge, both where just okay to me just think the other did slightly better 

Nice read and battle. Ice probably the best written from you so far. Nice structure to the punch and had nice multis along with the flow. Death you also had a nicely written verse. Pretty creative with ya. Punches throughout. Felt ya last few bars were kinda light to ice last few bars to end the battle. Overall I felt smoke punches hit a little harder here but could go possibly the other way around based off presence. Good shit fellas 

I'll break this down bar-by-bar and give out points for each bar. Winner is the one with the highest total

Ice Bear

only time ya ever had bars- they was IN YA WINDOWS// slam your fuckin-ass in a double-glass "pane/pain", thats INNUENDOS//

Innuendo wordplay is very played but I did like the pane/pain addition. +1

its like you're losing a ranked match- ya can't WIN YOUR 1'S BRO// the way this barrel hot- ya GETTIN 'SMOKED' YO! ya think ya SO TUFF but you know ya won't SHOW UP// im finna TOKE SUM- to be 'blunt,' ima roll 'SMOKE UP'//

I'll give all this +1 even though it's arguably more than one bar. It's worth a point all together. "Win your 1's bro", I'm not convinced that anyone has ever said "win your 1's" in this context. Hot/smoked and blunt/smoke are both very simple but not outright bad. +1

i went and read your last-verse, still ain't no capped-words, wish i NEVA READ A WORD OF YOU// bruh, no-'cap' how is he so-phat when dis "M-F" HASN'T HEARD OF 'DOOM'??//

This isn't structured like most good punches on LB are, but I still liked it. I did think that the rhyming of MF HASN'T/NEVA READ A was stretched. +1

we can see ya WROTE ALL YA SHIT IN THREE DAYS// cause 'death' ya was out here 'STROKIN' YA DICK WITH BNAS// you got no presence, you ain't GOT NO EMEMIES// cause you know that if you really stepped up, they'd BLOCK YO ENERGY// im wasting time on these bars, battling DEATHSTROSMOKE// no point 'sockin' it to this dude just to GET 'NO-SHOW'ED// up in his dms like 'do me favor and drop this time- QUID PRO QUO!//

This is all what I presume to be personals but I don't really see a punch in here so I'm giving it all a collective +1. Which is less than a point per bar since there are multiple bars worth of words in here.

on some faggot shit, ya lettin J Cole DICK YA THROAT sayin shit like THIS THE GOAT// but on a real note, you just BIT HIS WHOLE LYRICAL FLOW// I'm destroying you, kid- I'm TAKING THE GARBAGE OUT// the way im 'puttin you in ya place,' guess im APPRAISING APARTMENTS NOW!!!

First off, BIT HIS WHOLE/LYRICAL FLOW is a broken multi unless you meant it as ly-RICAL FLOW. I didn't really like the ending punch. What does appraising an apartment have to do with putting you in it? I'll give this all a +1 but remember that really works out to less than a point per bar worth of material on average.

DeathstroSmoke

First off... I apologize for the No-shows!!! Now that's out the way.. I hope my opp is prepared for the slaughter. When i put the chainsaw to Ice Bear, it's not a animal sculpture outta frozen water.

This is alright. My main complaint is the two-syllable multi. Three is usually the bare minimum. The punch isn't bad but it's also not that good because the flip is simple. You say you're putting the chainsaw to Ice Bear but it's not putting the chainsaw to Ice Bear. We can see it coming and that softens the impact. +1

I know that sound a little crazy!! But my mind is a project elavator.. all out of Order. Maybe i should switch to the 45. Eagle-to-the-back-of-the head, will he survie? It's a "toss up", like the flip of a quarter.

Everything I said about the previous bar applies to this. +1

The "Exit wound" stupid!! Like a DmX and Steven Segal movie. To be real.. Killing you dont move me..Truely.. The initial shots killed him, but i keep shooting even after the first-two/to- land-; Amerigo Vaspeucci.

I liked the first to land concept, but I have a couple complaints. First off, his name is spelled Amerigo Vespucci, not Vaspeucci. Second, two-syllable multis again, ouch. Third, Amerigo Vespucci's voyages had nothing to do with shooting as far as I know, so that part of the concept doesn't fit. Those complaints aside, this is the first bar in this battle I liked enough to give a +2, it's funny.

Then leave you for the vultures, and watch them "eat off the body".. Like Japanesse Businessman enjoying sushi.You from Sanford?? Maybe ill take a drive thru for the view. Just to see how Ice-Block-stack up.. THis choppa will melt your igloo. Your fathers a turkey Baster and your mother's a whore, and didnt-give-a-fuck-to-have-you.

I kinda liked the ice block thing but that's it. Rhyming was painfully simple. I'll give this all a collective +1.

Guess you a creation of artifical insemination, now you put yourself in a situation facing decapitaion from a altercation you asked for. Begging me to right my verse.. Bitch chill, before i come to Sanford for real..to see how you "survie in the wild". Only thing forensics find is Bear Grylls(Grillz)

Okay the Bear Grylls thing made me chuckle haha. What I didn't like is the rhyming. The first part of this had the longest rhyme scheme in your verse (decapitation/alteraction/insemination etc) but one-word rhymes don't lend as much to the bar as multi-word rhymes do. +1

Totals: Ice Bear 5, DeathstroSmoke 6

Main things each battler could work on. Ice Bear, I think your bars would be better if it there were a clearer distinction of where one ends and the other begins. I'm not saying your style is necessarily bad, but especially when you're starting out, it's best to formulate your bars more regularly. DeathstroSmoke, your bars would hit much harder if your multis were longer. Fair's in.

Ice bear wins. Just a bit cuz. Deathro does do no shows. Both are. Good. Icy. Bear. Just. Got. It .this time

I likes ices twist on innuendo never thought of it before,feel he done enough to take this battle fv as alwqys

Shits a draw