good spar gents 

shade you have good concepts that can be formed into good punches, just keep at it and read rules guide to text in the forums

Fairly basic stuff from shade but at least he was trying to be direct , pause on that first line tho . I feel RBT was ahead with his concepts here fv in

Nice content friend. Good Luck, no hate, just respect. 

one was just on another level with the rhyming and punches. shade has potential but a lot of work to do before he gets there. fv is in

Respect homie I was just starting to rap I don't know if I'm good or not just tryin 

Respect Shade, no doubt. 

Nice attempt from Shade here. Bartender collapsed his opponent with chin shots and had better metaphors thru out his drop

bartender a genious he packed it up and. Packed it. In 

winner is just more experienced here. harder hitting with better set-ups. loser here has alot of potential, once he larns how to set-up some schemes to go with his punches. fair is in good battle

Thought this was better and much easier reading. Both good though 

Clear winner. Challenger caught a case and won't be returning unfortunatley. Votes in.