I think Death had the hader concept for the punch here but lacked solid rhyming structure to execute it well. I get that people wannna be diffrerent and have their own styles n shit but its gotta flow and read well which aint likely to happen if your finishing bars with a single syllable scheme. This sort of style would work well in audio so death should keep that in mind. 

Phes ending punch was relevant set up was kinda basic but the whole bar was more polished in comparison. Just worked better as a text battle bar 

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This was a dope battle. I got one taking this with slightly better execution overall, with the personal element added. But the others concept was nice for sure. Good ass one bar battle. Votes in fellas

Winner edged it with the multis close battle loser had good wordplay

Phe: Pretty solid bar here man, you were able to mesh two different ideas together without them reading awkward. A real technical drop here, showed your prowess in reducing lines down to 240 characters so props, not my best finisher though, just wasn't the freshest angle but still good overall.

DeathstroSmoke: Great flow & idea with the sundial concept but you lacked the execution here, the wordplay wasn't the best technical but it was definitely creative, like your style & vocab but having stronger multi sets will take you further, especially in a One Bar where every single character counts, this would've been dope if you worked it into an 8 or 16, etc. with other elements, definitely think your style is more long form but try to tighten it up for One Bars, that's definitely the challenge of them.

Overall: My winner here took this with a more technical verse, actually liked my loser's concept more but the execution wasn't fully there. Props to both and keep elevating y'all!

Nice read from both i think Phe had more creative punches and a a bit more proper structure but death always has good ideas just needs to have more creatice execution imo so fair is tossed folks.

One orchestrated a nice punch here and the set up and visual was nice as well. The loser fell short here. Fairs in

I don't know what happened to DS here he usually come with some dope multis and punches but I guess this one bar shading is a different animal.. I have to give this to Phe he came with the multis and the bigger punch, yall both flowed good but one brand more elements to the table.. on that note MAY THE BEST BARS PREVAIL!

both came simpler here.

smokes first line got a chuckle out of me, second line went nowhere

the rhyme scheme looked like a weakness but it wound up working to your benefit

smoke had the better multis, flow and vocab, phe takes punches, wordplay, structure

difficult choice but phe edges this one