props to both for a good battle, but in the end i fee lone had more directed/harder hitting bars.

One was ahead in all departments here,fair vote as always.

Nice battle here fellas. I liked some of the losers punches but I felt like a few didn't connect. Winner had some more consistent punches and his bars were original but hard 

Chris took this by hitting more here. Both lacked with consistency and creativity. Death started off nice but quickly fell off. I felt like death had some good concepts and executed some of them nicely but didn't keep that same heat throughout his verse. Chris had some of the same issues I've been mentioning to him but his structure made his verse smoother although he did have wording issues. 

Close battle... Death had the better punches towards the end I did like both as far as flow and schemes but Death pulled the W for this 1 nice work fellas may the best 1 prevail. FvN 

I feel like i need to start breaking some of my bars down. 

But like a recovering pill head, "drop the Addy"/ address(Adderall)and I'll kill you literally

I was refering a person on pills. Adderall is a  widely abused pill. It's called Addy on the street and i also was talking about pulling up to address his Address, witch is also called addy on the street. 

expose chris-style(christol)like the Jay-z in 06'. Jay-z boycotted Christol champange in 2006 

You from Atlanta?? Somebody get this queer the fuck outta here. What zone you from? Don't matter. It'll be the Ozone, when i appear.

ATL has a high gay population. Also its broken into zones.. Zone 1-6 

Everything is a blur, when you refocus you'll see a savage with a drake. But it ain't a Aubrey and 21 tour

Drake and 21 savage have a tour called its a blur . Drake is short for Draco . Aubrey is Drake's real name 

Thank you for all the feedback and the votes.  I feel sometimes my bars are missed because of cultural differences. But im too lazy to break the bars down or dont wanna feel like im swaying a vote. But idagf now..  I use this for a coping skill anyways. Just tryna be understood when i rap.  

Beat me twice but now u not KILLIN ME POSER, I decapitate ya Ws like GUILOTIND SOLDIERS, like "da arrest of a Lotto Con Artist" ya WINNIN STREAKS' OVER! -- help me understand here what "decapitate your Ws" means? How do you decapitate a win? Feels like a forced setup to make the multi for guiillotined soldiers work, and it doesn't. The last bar here has a similar issue, a very forced setup to make the multi work. Why is this site so obsessed with multis and why does everyone approach multis like the Brit leagues do? "Like a lotto con artist", "ya winning streaks over". I mean, no... this is so forced and it really weakens the punch with how awful the setup is.

2 his head I WILL AIM PROUDLY n GIVE HIM ROUNDS B even if D on da offensive n HIS FLAMES CLOUDY, "defense against smoke is highly effective" THIS AINT MAUI! - I like the last sentence, "defense against the smoke" ---> this ain't Maui. Maybe not the cleanest execution of a Maui punchline, but it works here. Now the rest of this... forced setups into a shaky multi. Also pause on giving another man "rounds, B". Also adding "B" to the end of the multi just to make it flow definitely loses you points here.

dont like me coz I know Ds' NOT GREAT TEXT BORE, "Everybody Hates Chris but no1 wants 2 Die" so WE ALL HATE DEATH MORE -- I want you to read this out loud. "D'S not great text bore". Come on.

Dis CLOWNS' A HISTAMINE, I wash u OUT W/ LISTERINE, "dissolvin Smoke" W/O DA NICOTINE! - I almost threw my iPad through my wall reading this. "Dis clowns a histamine"!?!?! Do you even care what you say leading into your multis? How many times have we heard the "wash you out like listerine" bar? And the final nicotine bar completely misses the mark.

still, you're getting the win here because its a snipe

death, I don't even wanna break down your verse because you went into the comments and expo's every single line even though none of them needed explanations. Are there really people who didn't know the whole addy meaning address or adderall ? I also laughed my ass off reading "its called Addy on the street", dog its called "Addy" in the schoolyard lmaooooo.

Chris Style and Cristal (FTFY) is not a homophone. They sound nothing alike, that's not wordplay. 

Atlanta diss makes sense, but like, low hanging fruit.

the drake/21 savage bar was decent, but like, you're telling me you couldn't have come up with a more creative execution to that? That was probably the most straightforward punchline ever, which works, but doesn't have any flavor or style to it. What's a punch without personality behind it? It lands, but it just lacks a voice and overall it is a bit weaker for not having a more creative setup or approach to the line.

Your bars are 100% not being missed because of "cultural differences". Nobody is "misunderstanding" your bars, they're not complex in any respect or manner. 

smoke started off strong  with the punches but his verse fell apart after the Netflix line, when punches was all he had going for him. rhymes were simple, one to two syllables.

Chris brought it like always. consistent punches with a few nasty multis and always knows how to finish strong instead of devolving into rambling like our unfortunate loser

both brought it and i enjoyed both verses but chris has the edge with consistency and multis

fairs in boys

Chris 21 takes it with better multis and writing in general. A lot missing from deaths verse 

Aye this was aite. 

Chris my first time reading your battles like that the flow and the concepts are there. Hate Death More and Physics in Reverse were fire. but there getting drowned by your other material here which hurts you because DeathStro was out the gate with the punches landing. I fuck with the creativity though just hone in on more concepts like the two mentioned.  I got Death Clear by punches flow and concepts. FVNH. 

Death was more concise and I thought the addy and Netflix joints were the best two bars of the battle. Although, death you kinda slowed down in the second half and had some lines that really fell flat: Drake 21 line, the dissaray portray shit. 

Chris I really feel like you force a lot of set ups just to create a multi that goes no where. I'm not tryna hate cuz I think u have some cool concepts but you have to think about what point you actually wanna make , what the payoff of the punch is and how your set up prepares it. 

For example : "U dont like me coz I know Ds' NOT GREAT TEXT BORE, "Everybody Hates Chris but no1 wants 2 Die" so WE ALL HATE DEATH MORE! " 

What the fuck does this mean dude? 

He doesn't like you because he's not great text bore?

I get the everybody hates Chris reference, and then tying it into his Name being death , everyone hates death more. I get that, I like the concept. But you set that up with NOT GREAT TEXT BORE.

That's very forced writing my boy. 

U could use a set up like:

EXPECT LESS FOR ,

CHECK THE SCORE,

ESCAPED A MORGUE

Etc. 

I'm just throwing things out there but u get my point. 

U can't just throw words together to create a set up only for the sake of getting a specific multi punch across. The set up is as important as the punch. And sometimes the juice isn't worth the squeeze so you can abandon the line altogether. 

No hate, appreciate you. 

Thanks for the feedback,  everyone. 

Good battle @Christwentyone

@Metalgear thanks for the feedback . 

You kinda proved my point.  About cultural differences.  

Quick Vote: Pretty much agreed with TGG & Cosovic's breakdowns, swings & misses on both sides but my winner was a touch more creative which edged it for me. Really close y'all, could go either way tbh, might wake up tomorrow & decide the other took this, anyways, props & keep elevating y'all!

Thanks u too death

This was a tough one Death flow was on point, landed a few jabs, kind of lacked in the multi category though. On the other hand 21 flow is decent landed a few heavy punches and multi game was there... on that note MAY THE BEST BARS PREVAIL!