was actually hyped to check this out since both dudes have been showing good looks on da field recently ( no homo ) 

so the first thing i done was listen to this T pain guy and the bartender track..  ehhh yea its like pop music so yea no where close to fire imo lol so the first swing from kwon was a miss even tho the bar was executed and set up very well . Next bar did land tho , would prefer it if u had not capitilzed the IRRE part of irresponsibly as for me the multi would have read cleaner considering the scheme and multi count used to set it up , however it is good to use half or part of the scheme  midway thru the bar ( something i do a lot myself ) but the ending punch to the bar really wants to be exact to the starting scheme of the bar in question. i hope that makes sense lol . Another thing i get a lil picky with is the speed of which multis are generally pronounced , something again i used to do a lot myself but i think im starting to address that now . i.e STICK UP  naturally rolls off the tounge quicker than SICK PUP so it can affect how well your bars are flowin even if the multis are still matchin , just something to keep in mind when writing. Overall still a pretty solid ass verse tho i did notice that kwon did not fill the box ( thats not very veteran of u kwon smh lol ) 

On to RBT aka weirdsmith :p jk . Now whilst you also had an interesting set up i feel you also missed your first swing purely for the fact that the ending punch to the bar was CMON LAME , would have made more sense to me if u switched the set up with the ending punch as that would have been more impactful. i like that the fact that u use a lot of double schemes inbetween the punchlines, altho your next bar had issues with the scheme , u set it up with DONE WRONG IN GAME so thats a x 4 scheme , then u ended the bar with a x 3 scheme but added the fourth syllable after putting another word in front of it . For me this really hurt the flow of that bar as the multi scheme did not read clean , the concept was quite comical tho. Your closing bar was probably BOTB for me , i like what u did with the name play. i also like how u kept to the basketball theme even tho i dont know fuck all about basketball , i can see how u were wrkn stuff , the expo definitely helped haha 

so this is mighty close for me u both had issues , id say that kwons multis were generally cleaner overall but this came down to overall creativity and the fact that kwon was a line short of filling the box which could have potentially changed my vote on this . Edge to RBT , good match up yo ... jeez how long have i been fkn typing for? 

this could go either way 

Non Expo Vote Removed. Swaying comments also removed. BarTendeR, do not talk about the battle or the votes while the battle is still active, its against the rules and is deemed as swaying. 

All good, man. 

Aight Kwon, will get at this later on bro. Good Luck!!

Expo's:

"Throiw Shots when DONE WRONG IN GAME" refers to taking free throws when fouled in a basketball game.

"define a closer" refers to the definition of being a closer.  a closer in basketball is that player who shuts the end of the game down by any means neccessary.

"DONT BOAST coz YOU'RE DUNKING" refers to how we all know when a muh fucker finally dunks for the first time then he start talking shit.

"KWON WON'T OVERCOME NOTHING" is a play on his name while including his name at the same time.  (K)won (W)ont (O)vercome (N)othing.  K-W-O-N.

Good Battle Kwon, good luck my guy.  No hate, just respect.  

I enjoyed this battle here both dropped nice stuff with their own styles but 1 here slightly edged it for me. Good beefing fair vote in.

good match up here fellas, i went with the stronger concept, and the one who stood out more in my opinion, 

good match up here fellas, i went with the stronger concept and wittier punches, and the one who stood out more in my opinion, and i like the fact the winner i stuck to his concept and made it make sense, also had some internal rhyme patterns going on,  on that note MAY THE BEST BARS PREVAIL!

Nice one fellas , there can only be one winner for vote in 

Odin, my apologies bro. Wasn't meaning to sway a vote at all. Was just a bit perturbed that in a PL battle, there not being an explanation of the vote itself. But again, dualy noted and appreciate you letting me know. I hadn't the slightest idea that it could have been taken that way. Appreciate you. No hate, just respect. 

Hard one to call here. Both dudes went for eachothers heads, both openers were dope but my winner I felt was more consistent with the wordplay. Both fire only one can win

Kw0n: Multi's were okay but you had some issues, repeating (He's) & broken (Irresponsibly). T-Pain was your best line, somewhat played if I'm being picky doe. Poke It line fell flat imo & finisher was formatted weird, made it hard to follow but technical was good. Overall not a bad drop, nothing spectacular but the rhyming aspects were there.

TRB: Decent verse here but it was a bit over complicated, don't rely too much on your expo, it takes away from your verse. Appreciated the effort into adding complexity but it just wasn't fully hitting. Technically you've got the style down, especially with using inner rhymes, just work on your punchlines and you'll be a problem, you had some good setups, just needed to follow through with a strong punch.

Overall: Hard to vote on this one y'all, both had highlights & definitely lowlights but going with who I thought approached this with a more battle rap, attack your opponent type verse, could go either way, props y'all, keep elevating!

bar won and I am choosing him cause he is the most one who I know

Can a mod please take that Vite down from godlinked please. Never heard of him. 

Re-opened Battle for more votes

Great battle fellas

As for flows KwonBron got that but he focused Soo much on flows that he forgot about the main factor (punchlines) and that cost him this battle .. His opponent just had more punches packed in his verse although the lebron James punch was just a filler didn't hit hard