there was a very notable difference in bar structure , DS you seem to have the right angles , if u could just translate that into some solid multischemes u could be droppin top tier shit like the Dicaprio had huge potential had it bee set up and structured better . Highlightng words that are not rhyming with each other is a big throw off two. Still an entertaining read none the less . I have Mask with a convincing win here Fv 

Expo

- He lost to Gawd, Unbeatable rhyme & concise 

-Smoke inhalation damages the windpipe 

- MASKETTE = Small Mask "make mask look small" 

- Reaper is a software to make beats / loops 

- Post traumatic amnesia: waking from a coma and remembering nothing 

- Goth kids, hanging out at Graves . raves/dance 

- DeathstroSmoke : DS./  Nintendo DS

- Rihanna performed half time at Super Bowl , she was on a stage in the air "bitch in the sky" 

- Committee is also known as a Group Body  "group of bodies" 

 - SHREK universe : "land far far away" 

- Sam Smith refers to himself as THEM, His clothing at the BRIT awards caused controversy . "Dress Them up" 

anything else , ask 

One had some pretty hilarious lines .. entertaining drop, clean read despite typos, but was just overall elementary compared to his opponent who made use of multi-syllabic rhyming while punching more consistently, albeit being light imo. Other dude just needs to step it up w/ the rhyming. Good read nonetheless

Death- to be candid...you had some kinda dated line here bro. the concepts werent terrible, but the punches aint hit because you never quite got a good flow goingMasked- some pretty dope lines actually. consistent throughout and enjoyable to read. clear winner here imo

Props to both on showing out for the LBT and writing a 32. I fucking hate writing 32s lol so good work on that.

Death you had some solid bars in there like the whip lash one and your closer. Overall though, I felt like Reap got this with a more consistent punching pattern. Good battle to both.

Long ass read here. My winner had better punches, more creative bars and some of his multis were something thought out of the box. Fairs in gentleman 

Good on both but the references for the winner hit and the complex multi-syllable rhymes were fire. Nicely done.

Good battle, i felt death had good flows and really fought well but i think masked edged it with much harder punches, structure, and few other concepts. Apprechiate da shoutout also. Fair vote no hate.

sorry DS i feel yuh passionate but not the sting it takes to take down MR, i think you might have potential to compete due to your conviction, you just need to incorporate punches and more multis and rhyme schemes in yuh verse no hate just my honest opinion, MR went pretty light on this one on that note MAY THE BEST BARS PREVAIL!

Deathstro fucked up every punch he attempted to make, syllable count was off,.. like by the time you get to , I'm the Man behind the Iron Mask,.. It gets you upset as a Reader, because that Punch is witty but built up in a Trash ass way,.. juxtaposed to masked, which most of his shit made sense,.. idk what a Maskette is though..

Oh wow just comin back here, i just submitted my verse to mask a few days ago, n noticed theres a few words i wrote eerily looks kinda similar to few of mask bars here n i dont even remember da lyrics here, dats kinda weird but once again i dig da shout out.