Not a bad battle here... both have ares they need to improve in though. 

Floetry, You spent way too much time on one punch. It was a good punchline and i liked the build up to it but it took damn near 6 of your lines to get to it. Thats ok in a 32, not in an 8 liner. In an 8 liner you need to be in and out... having said that, i still fucked with the constant connections. UR, You have seom decent concepts man but your wording is killing you. One Example:  "BITCH, YOULL GO SWORD ur self 4 sayin GRR blocks who dont vote his POLL FORWARD" ... Write and rewrite your concepts out and make sure they're smooth flowing and make sense, fam. Again, decent ideas but your execution and wording is poor and needs more work to make your ideas hit. 

Fairs in, fellas. 

Okay.

Flo

Opener: Pointless/rakin snow, felt like it could have had it stronger opener. 

Middle: Tried to Plot/rhyme scheme was top level flow. I get the line "meeting my father, only time I get popped". Took me a double take to get it cuz getting popped can have a double meaning lol, but this bar was dope.

Closer: Slippin cuz I just mopped. Not bad for a blind battle.

Unbeatable

Opener: Great wordplay diseat/deceipt /fable. No value to the table. Unbeatble wins the opener.

Middle:  Nice bars thruout. Overall fave is still floe's dad popped line. But fairly close in the middle with rhymes/punches/wordplay.

Closer: Responding to a half blind, does give responder a slight advantage with the name. But wordplay was pretty nice to close off flow a tree/floetry. 

Slight edge to unbeatable. Liked some of floes bars tho. 

FVNH

basic vs concepts? hhmm gotta go with who edged it for me. fv 

               sry for the wasted jot                                                                 lol forgot to send vote.