My winner had cleaner execution here with his bars. Was more coherent and smoother reading. Fairs in, fellas. 

Nonsensical vote removed. 

Fuck it. I'll save my detailed expo because after writing it I realized it was harsh as fuck. If you want to know why you won or lost, just hit me up. I didn't enjoy reading either of these, let's put it that way. I've got a winner though, but barely. Fair's in.

Expo

The entire verse is a sweets/bakery scheme:

vanilla, relish, bland mixture, sourin, con-faction/confection, bitter, bar, wrap licka/replica,sneakers/Snickers, powder, rain, bow/rainbow, fruity, jammy, eye candy, glucose, sweet-tooth, sugar coatin, jaws-breakin/(jawbreaker candy is type of a hard candy), raisin, chalk lit/chocolate

Breakdown:

team(faction) sourin(bitter) crooks(con) - con-faction that act bitter. Bitter confection

clone(wrap licka/raplica) got no taste for bars (as in rap bars but also candy bars), he just lickin wrappings

sneakers (Snickers)

SOON as I 'EYE CANDY (soon as I see candy as in Snickers but also his shoes), my rifle HANDY, poweder rain, bow (gun powder but also rainbow powder) or this FRUITY (crazy person) get SIGHT JAMMY (his eyes get covered with gooey jam-like material, brain matter)', this MOVE not an EYE CANDY (everything I just said is eye candy in a literal sense: colorful fruity, jammy thing on his eyes, but i'm also sayin that this is all for real, not something that's superficially attractive to look at which is the definition of eye candy)

I-DRAW-MY-FANGS(tooth)-AT his GLUCOSE(sugar) N SHIT', i got a SWEET-TOOTH but also i'm talkin some cannibalistic shit since glucose is in blood. n no 'sweet (sugar) TRAUMA-BLANKET (coatin) can EASE-WOUNDS' n I aint sugar COATIN SHIT. but also I'm tellin you straight up that trauma-blanket aint helpin you, no nonsense sugar coatin.

'colorful OUTLINE of his SKULL-CAVIN with a stick like glow in the DARK-CRAYON' (with this stick or glow in the dark crayon you can make colorful outlines but also his skull cavin will provide all kinds of action, colorful stuff. Outline is also a term that evokes the image of a corpse outline on the street), my chalk lit (so my stick is lit/colorful with the action but also chalk lit as in chocolate) n its not for this DAWG-TAKIN (it's not for this dude, he can't handle it but also dawg as in dog and if dogs eat chocolate their body basically starts failin and might also result in death.)

Expo -

Beef = Dick (he wants it all) 

Homies = (Spit venom/snakes)

Filling these plates/MILKING these SNAKES = he's been kept full off of his homies 'releases'

MIND-LESS/spine-less/smashed = crash test dummies

Will explain this vote as I know I'll get asked...

Village... you got those rhymes nice but a lot are filler words not dissing your opponent 

I COME-SNATCHIN ya 'DAMN SNEAKERS' SOON as I 'EYE CANDY, my rifle HANDY, powder rain, bow or this FRUITY get SIGHT JAMMY', this MOVE not an EYE CANDY

this whole line was filler used for rhyming. In an 8 bar battle focus on getting those punches in; not these kinda rhymes. 

Zezz: your verse was more direct and the punches were structured better. 

faggots' 'mind-less' and 'spine-less' and even compared to the worst incels he's 'SMASHED'-LESS HUNNIES, luckily for this kid his boys 'beat his ass' and 'toss him around like CRASH-TEST DUMMIES!

^ Each line is a diss and aimed towards the opponent.  

that was the difference here. Fair vote in, im cool with you both. Hope the feedback helps. 

Fairs in. Gb if yall want an expo shoot me a dm otherwise I'm chillin.

Tough battle but i think VI went harder, that glucose line i thought was dope but zezz did his fing init..so fvnh .

Zezz refs forced as fuck, giving to village idiot. Fv

I know what u were tryna do with the multiple schemes Village but I feel like it made yo verse harder to read. Zezz had a more straight forward approach that I appreciated more and the crash test dummies line was nice. Ggz to both 

Good battle. Simply put, I thought one gave more of a coherent read, although I do appreciate one's strive to be creative. Keep @ it yall. 

Village gets my vote, it was pretty even as far as flow, I think village had it on punches and overall style. Zezz had a good bout here but my vote is in!! Good battle to both keep it up

this was a good one, however, theres gotta be a winner. Respect

Altho I think the confectionery scheme was a lil bit of a reach my winner had more content and Punch's thrown at his opponent.. 

Zezz I liked the crash test dummie line if you had more hits like that you could have took this, just not enough Punch's thrown good battle tho guys 

This one is hard lol 

Both of your buildups in the beginning land pretty hard and the scheme/angles on both are pretty nice The lack of personals is supriseing but I think adds to make this match more competitive too. I got the slightes edge with Vill with this one Just watch the repeated word in the buildup.  I do not dislike the approach from Zezz at all though this was a good match.