i fell like Wars bar was more punch heavy here , set up was particulaly fire ...Smiths bar seemed like more of a flex bar to me nice idea tho

fv

Nice concepts on either side here. WarSand executed his stronger here, made a bigger impact with his punchline. Also, iLL Smith, the extra syllables inbetween multis isn't working, imo. Having "like life" in the middle of the first multi set hurt the multi set. It would be better suited for Audio, that style of writing more so than text. 

Fairs in, gents. 

iLL Smith:

You had a nice concept but it just felt unfinished. It started to go somewhere then all of a sudden, it just stopped. Having nearly half the char limit kinda crippled this. It was like you used one arm & he used two.

WarSand:

Polished idea from front to back. Both punches landed, and both maintained the same idea w/ the Dumb & Dumber theme. Rhyming was good & so was the flow. Nice job.

My bad. Getting to this now

ACE EASE

War packed more complexity into his bar and set it up quite well. Wasn't feeling iLLs set up or multis in that bar

fair vote in. GL Both 

Both came out swinging but warsand had cleaner multies, and his punchline was hard hitting compared to his opponent. For sure wording could have been better but the multis played a crucial role for the punchline to stick out 

War had better structure but ill had an easier flow and faster to get the wordplay in my opinion, but both dudes were creative. Fv no hate.

This is very one-sided to me so I'll keep it simple. iLL Smith's bar was very self-hype and not as direct as his opponent's bar was which really took away from the punch. WarSand's bar, albeit longer, was a lot more clean with the rhyming and was way more direct as far as hitting his opponent goes.

ILL punch was nice. Preferred your bar but first line broke multi structure. WarSand bar was aight. Stayed consistent 

no hate but one is simply outclassed. I like the "ill and war" concept but you played it poorly, as well as providing a poor setup with poor multis. It's impossible for me to score you highly, set up like was drastic. 

Winner I don't have to say much, I quite liked it. 

I just liked the concept of ill's better. Bother we're ok not great

Voted short and to point like a dagger weapon and that's it