Both bars are worded weirdly/read awkwardly. 

I prefer Phro's connections in his bar to Detri's, also feel his punchline was a little fresher. Props to both, best of luck. 

I Got Phrox here Derti had some swag and decent concepts, but wording was pretty poor imo. Phoxs (;0) closer hit as hard as the set up imo. but still dope enough 

Phroxen concept & execution were far more creative & hard hitting to me. Detri was good as well but it didn't do enough for the W. Props to both

DETRI_MENTAL: Punch just fell short for me man, opener was a question? Wording just didn't work, didn't sound natural and Sig sounds you're talking about his signature. Stunt Scenes sounds weird to me, Stunt Sets would've completed the visual. Not bad though, rhyming was on point and goblin cheeks was nasty lol 7/10

Phroxen: Concepts were fresh here, liked the unintentional? flip on his opener, One Punch Man (great show) was a cool reference, didn't get what TD is supposed mean but Lush One was a hilarious punch. 8/10

DM: ALL HE DROP IS GUN SCHEMES?! weak hoe-even ma SHAWDY'D KNOCK'IZ CUCK BEAK-off man's WARTY-GOBLIN CUNT CHEEKS! so put da Sig Down or i'll 'Wreck ya Set' with 'Big Rounds' like when giant BALLS DEMOLISH STUNT SCENES!  

I liked the end punch, 'big rounds' was a nice concept and it was flipped well. But everything else leading up to it felt like filler.

Phroxen: im UNFUCKWITABLE DUMP SLUGS INTA U or its Cassius Clay watchin anime "Ali sees One Punch, Man" feel like a GUNBUTT HITTIN U getn a KO/TD "catchin sumn from the hands" or "answer to a bald head" like a LUSH ONE INTERVIEW

This was solid, I liked the Ali and OPM set up to the punch at the end.

I'm giving this one to Phroxen, solid bar with set ups that didn't seem like filler. Although I thought that DM had a slightly better concept I felt that Phroxen had the more polished bar and overall harder hitting punch. Good battle to you both.