Letum: multies were decent.. the middle got a bit choppy after the salute section then the additive of "being broke" kinda seemed misplaced in the rhythm but helped for the overall bar.. you had a few jabs then wordplay at the end that was a bit of a stretch but the concept was nice and collectively made it a nice bar.

Shodan: multies were on point.. readability was better than Letum's bar, along with a better storytelling point of view. However, you had one jab at the end and I wasn't really feelin it. Your build up was great but it just didn't hit at the end for me.

Nice bars here, lads. Boths setups were nice and each bar flowed well. Letums punchline hit harder for me than Sho's. I can see this going either way. Best of luck to both.

The nam scheme was decent but i think Shodans multis made a solid punch. Fair vote.

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Letum: Good drop here, mini jab + punch was a good combo, plus nameplay made it more personal.

Shodan: Great personal here that wasn't obvious, setup was great too, made the punch have more impact.

Overall: Close battle here, both had personal punches but I'm edging this to Shodan for having a more concise, relevant punch. Letum, you had some good ideas but I felt like you jammed too much into the limited space which hurt your setup / possibility for a stronger punch.

Both bars are horribly scary... cuase one has No legs... and the other has 4 wheels... and my shits a red tricycle...(if yall SAW that or read it)

Letum had a better set up thought the other guy had kind of a basic punch for all that build up gb send bars

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Letum:

I RUIN HIS PLANS Sho ez money, ya’ll VIEWIN’ A BAND run up like TROOPS DID IN NAM’,

Alright, so far it's going well, I don't understand the 'viewin a band' seems like filler.

n get rolled out- salute YOU CAN’T STAND being broke, asking God for this smoke n there’s no LOOT IN IT DAN!

At first it doesn't look like the first bar doesn't rhyme but it does if you add the 'lute' onto it. I liked the concept of the last line but I didn't feel like it hit as hard as it could've. If it was flipped better it would've been stronger.

Shodan:

Drive to Texas in my F-150 & give him a dirtnap, the LEAD-IN-THE-HEAD SORT then lower the tailgate as the place of REST FOR HIS DEAD CORPSE!

Everything is flowing smoothly and each rhyme is setting up for the next one, I like it so far.

You'll "sleep in the back of my truck" so it makes SENSE YOU'RE FROM "BEDFORD!"

This was a strong finisher, nice and personal and all the multis lined up and it flowed well. Strong bar overall and nothing to critique.

Overall I'm gonna give this one to Shodan, solid bar with good a set up and execution.

Shodan gets it for the better concept and multis.  Letum one of ur multis seemed off "you can't stand / loot in it Dan"

fair vote in. GL to both 

Vit band as in a stack. Aka money. 

MR ... SaLUTE YOU CAN'T STAND. Lute was supposed to be in caps. Even tho it wasn't it's obviously not broken 

Gave it to Letum. He packed both more multis and better quality multis. Both were decent

Masked Lieutenant Dan lost his legs in Vietnam

Letum: I felt your multies could've been a little more congruent. RUIN HIS PLANS and  VIEWIN’ A BAND rhymes, but TROOPS DID IN NAM’ threw it off a little bit, maybe it's just my pronounciation. I felt the Lieutenant Dan from Forrest Gump concept was daring and creative. You set it up with the references to Vietnam and the "can't stand"..etc..since Lieutenant Dan lost his legs. I do feel the execution was a bit "forced"...not sure what other word to use. I also felt "LOOT IN IT DAN!" isn't readily translatable as wordplay for "Lieutenant Dan", and the Forrest Gump reference might be a bit obscure for some. Either way, you get points for creativity above anything else.

Shodan: I felt your multies were a lot cleaner and more congruent than your opponent's. You also maintained relevancy of concept. But the overall punch, which seems to rest on the association of "Bedford" to his sleeping in the back of your truck, which is known as the "bed" and the afforementioned F-150 being produced by Ford, therefore "Bed-ford"---was a bit underwhelming to be honest. It just didn't hit that hard, but it was written cleanly. 

Overall, this was a fairly close contest, but Letum edged it for me because I felt his concept was a tad bit more creative. Fairs.

I'm going with Letum on this one. I wasn't loving either guys concept here but Letum's I think was a bit cleaner and he didn't really reach as far for his concept as Shodan might have. F-150/Bedford just wasn't it for me tbh. 

this is tuff. i prefer my losers writing but my winners bars. I think loser wrote theirs a little smoother but the flip didnt land has hard as my winner. both nice.

Was honestly just more of a fan of Letum's bar here. Liked the concept and the overall execution of it was ok. Sho I feel you can do better than this, man. Did not like the concept at all (just doesn't hit hard enough to me). Everything else was alright. Fair's in.

Winner got more punches in I was feeling the wordplay

Won't sway. One clear winner, One sided if you ask me. No hate. Just being real 

Sho we had a nice voter turnout. Salute

Same to you, surprised to see this many votes on a battle these days