Pro: opening bar was long winded for the pubchline, wording was awkward too.The dr. Concept was nice but I dont believe a dr. would travel with their instruments/equipment when their on vacation, defeats the purpose of being on a vacation then. The wordplay didn't work in this one either, wordplay needs to work each way its being used grammatical, so when you read the sentence, the wordplay needs to make sense in each way. Something to keep an eye on. Seen you drop better. 

Con: Not a bad drop for an audio piece but in text you need to come harder than that, fam. The structure wasn't text related, multis will be seen as awkward for some Flow was nice, and made the transition from line to line smooth and easy. Wasn't really any punches in this piece though.

Overall: I've got PRO taking the win in this one with his attempt at making punchlines/showing creativity with his Santa and Dr. pieces. Fairs in, gents.

Giving my vote to Pro cuz of better Punchlines and multies

Really close battle here, PRO you've got the structure down but you've gotta work on only capitalizing words that rhyme and working on your set ups to land stronger punches, you had some good ideas but didn't fully deliver. Con, you had great flow, readability but you lacked any hard punches or setups, you pretty much just had some insults (jabs) instead of setting up punches. Both had they're faults and pros but edging this to PRO for attempting to punch. Again, really close skill-wise here, keep elevating y'all