Fat Shady vote should be removed, he is currently banned on his main account, made another account while banned... he has 0VP, so his vote carries no weight in my favour but out of principal. Will leave it to Shodan to call or if another staff memebr removes it, no worries. 

Fat Shady vote removed due to Shodan's request. 

Both had 221 chars.. did yall agree on that?

As far as the END PUNCH goes, I liked Shodan's better.. his last multi was tight and the setup wasn't that bad. His two setup multies I felt were filler though, and didn't really feel the glowing outline wordplay. The multies rhyme and work with what you tried to say, but they just felt awkward to read and didn't allow your bar to flow effectively.

As far as the bar AS A WHOLE goes, I liked Odin's better. Preaching/Scripts was a little jab. Slipped in "Bless him" to tie in with the theme.. okay. Bluffin and Pushin don't rhyme with my accent or any that I can replicate though, and Bluffin with Spits is filler. Your end punch was decent though.

It was close, and will probably come down to preference.

Close battle. Ill be back to vote 

Odin for the W. He had a better rhyme that worked better

Every line has to count for something in a One Bar imo. Shodan I feel like you tried to do too much here. Plan for his report is godly? Not to mention whore'll taunt me sounds weird af. You could've cut a lot of unnecessary filler here and had a good punch. Fuel, your bar was simple and everything added up to a punch of nice impact. A little drawn out but that's nitpicking. Fair's tossed.

Geek Squad!

I wasn't really felling Odins punch here don't get me wrong the setup was nice but the punch wasn't properly executed 

Shodan on the other hand was just on point from his set-up to his execution

Really close. Only thing that got my vote was that Shodan had 2 concepts in the bar; Odin had 1 and a filler multi in the middle .

very close battle. Good bar from each 

O was more direct but Sho had the better flow and delivery. Idk who to vote for tbh so ima just comment on it

Dope battle i felt Sho was hitting a little Harder and flowed better. Nice to both the. Fairs in.

Wasnt impressed by either, both lacked a good flow but I'm going with the Irish guy just for that funny white line .

Respect to both verses but i think one had a better flow it was easier to read..the other had good punch ideas though..fair vote no hate

I'd like the vote removed but I'll leave it for another staff member to decide

This is a tough one, tbh.

This here was evenly matched. Only way i was able to come up with a clear winner: which punch i felt hit the hardest.

Liked Odin's "white people in the bible" concept, solid set up and delivery. 

Felt Shodan's "fit for his body" line came just a little harder. 

Mid 8 to High 8. 

Removed 3V1L's vote as they have each other blocked.

Overall I'm not impressed with either of ya'lls work considering you only have to come up with 1 bar but I'll break this down best as I can

Shodan:

The rifle's ready to WHACK HIM IF THIS WHORE'LL TAUNT ME cause the night-vision scope shows a "glowing outline" like the PLAN FOR HIS REPORT IS GODLY

Multis seem forced in the sense that nobody talks like this in real life...Try to connect your words in a more natural way...However..It was readable for me & the glowing outline/plan for his report is godly connected decently with the night vision scope.

Odin

No one “Believes what you're preaching” you don't imPRESS WHEN PUSHIN' YA SCRITPS, 'BLESS HIM', BLUFFIN' W/ SPITS. See, you and battle rap?

Your multis aren't as forced as Shodan's in the sense that your bar reads how people would actually speak. However, you didn't punch at all up until this point & I purposely cut off both of ya'lls bars to highlight this point.

The last portion of ya'lls shits was meh.. I've heard a similar guitar line to Shodan's 'strap is fitted for this body' & at the same time I've heard similar white people in the bible bars...I'm going with who I think punched twice in 1 bar and that's Shodan.

Wait I fucked up being high and getting fancy with the text effects, on 2nd thought both of ya'lls bars read 'naturally' now that I remember this is text. I think in audio terms lately & I can't see someone rapping either of your bars without shuffling words around.

Odin took this