Decent reads here.

A&H, your verse flowed pretty well. I saw a few jabs.. mssng vowels was clever and the second half of the verse was done nicely. Cali, work on your setups a bit then your shit will really start to land.. specifically lines 3/4 and 6/7.. also never end a verse with plain talking unless you know for sure you completely bagged your opponent.

Isn't much to write home about here in this battle. Both have their issues to work on. A&H: Readability & FLow were nice. Some clever jabs here and there. The mssng vowels was your best punchline and was also the BOTB. 

Cali: Concetptually, you done ok. Though the execution of your concepts was lacking here. The wording and readablitiy/flow of your lines was awkward and made for a "stop start" read rather than a nice flowing piece. 

I've got A&H taking the win here in this one. Fairs in, gents. 

BrahMos hate vote removed

Both BrahMos and Armed &Hammered have beef and hate voted one another. Thats why his vote was removed. Same as A&Has vote that was removed from a BrahMos battle. 

October LBT PPV: BARTOBEERFEST - Rookie Throwdown

Good luck to both of you!

Easy win for Cali. Armed and hammered was dissing but no punch in what he said. Just insults wrapped up in a story. Not much explanation needed.

My fav bars from the battle: Fire House

Both were awefull armed send me 8 bro and I'll show u something. 

Funny how you didn't show up for the Tourney rattle.. who's awful? 

I appreciate all the comments and votes even if most of them are just haters. 

Armed & Hammered: First of all thanks for stepping up and sending this over so quickly. Alright so missing vowels & cruise down south/Florida bits were nice, you've gotta work on your setups but you've definitely got potential, good use of vocab too. Overall giving this a 4, you've got the rhyming down but you had too much filler (rhyming just to rhyme) focus on directly dissing your opponent but keep those concepts & metaphors that you displayed here.

CaliLuv: Good use of multi's here, if you work on your setups you'll be a problem on here, multi's are the first step towards having good punchlines and you're halfway there. Skin rash & Thanksgiving were your best bits here, opener wasn't bad either but that finisher could've been better, didn't quite land plus the Rookie Throwdown part wasn't needed. Overall giving you a 5 here, you've got the structure & multi's down, just work on more creative insults and you'll be on your way.

Overall: Appreciate both of you for stepping in the ring, both had good moments & some bad ones too, I'd definitely like to see a rematch since it was so close here and may the best Rookie win.

Pretty close here tbh. I got Cali taking it due to having better attempts at punches. Armed was just dissing but didn't do any real damage. Hope to see both elevate. Fair is in Peace

Thanks student. Appreciate you breaking it down. I don't agree that I had too much filler though. I think filler is when you just say words to set up your punchline that don't rhyme and force your punches. 

I understand that this site has a standard way to operate. But to be honest I think it's pretty easy to use nine non rhyming words to set up a punch

Removed MCRattle's vote, A&R obviously wasn't a 1.

how is brahmos a hate vote? I know mcrattle hated on both of us. 

Because this guy cries on how his battles you remove votes for his favor? I hope ya'll see his real hate votes when he doesn't write a reason besides talking shit

I hope this site votes on actual battling and not who has the most basic flows. Proxen says his 2nd half was done nicely? re read this for everyones sake. but that vote stays.. i'm good with it, yall enjoy

I give it to mah boi Cali he was just there with the rhymes and word play but yall both did god

This a really good rookie battle, and I mean rookie to the site, Armed has a solid syllable verse, very light punches but definitely skill there, work on your structure, cap your multis, even with your multis uncapped I can see that they're broken, but I have seen you correct that in another battle and worked well for you, Cali, you're coming along well with the structure and set ups, they're just light but your multis were solid. I see potential in both great battle Imma give it a low 6 mid 6 fairs in.

dope battle gave it to his dude cus bars was lil more harder all g in the game yeee

Good competition i mean you both did good, i just like what im seeing with a and h better yfm

good job though to both congrats on a dope battle fr tho

A&H vowel line and OJ glove lines were favorites of yours. I like concise lines but vowels line was almost too quick of a hit

Cali: similar level of punches but felt rhymes were more difficult to pull off. Liked fire house/opener.

Both had personals throughout verse which was nice to see. 

Gotta give it to Cali by slightest of margins.

Cali just had a better flow and more punches. Arm was pretty ok but a lot of the things he said just didn't exactly flow right. Which is ok. Good job to both.