4 in dude foreign watches was dope..

Culprit had some great wordplay I like that meteorite shit, ha you a clever one!! Great multis and punches. You rocked it like usual. sypher, you did ok here for your first battle. I'd suggest reading other battles or just read culprits over a few times. Make sure you stay attacking your opponent with wordplay setups punches and multis and make sure it sounds dope too lol. That was a decent drop, keep reading and refining and your writing will improve! Gl!

Sypher had some nice lines but not nearly enough content. Culprit!!! Dope multi syllable rhyme scheme diggin it! Respect!

pretty easy reverse snipe for culprit, sypher fill da box and use multis n caps. fv

not a caps lock type dude. How bout we turn these same verses into audio? Exactly the way they written I want to hear them lnes on a beat.

I get it. no hate at all my dude. you got some witty lines. I just wanted to see how both of these translate to a beat if you down.

That makes sense.. I can see your lines translating to that for sure. Honestly, if I can learn to write like that my punchlines/multis in audio will probably sharpen up. I appreeciate the battle bro. Honestly its been a long time since ive writen anything.

This was a decent battle for sure.

Sypher - had some good lines i can see how your verse would translate to audio obviously but this is a text battle. It is completely seperate and different to audio battles. You had some good stuff thoguh

Culprit - gahhd dammit i am writing a verse and litterally had a me to your right bar LOL obviously have to leave it out now. Good battle though i liked your drop esp the watches punch

just my FV guys, CKT

clear to culprit

one has formatting and multis other was basic nonhate

pretty dope rap battle, maybe ill see some more in future