Expo: Jacob = Israel from Bible 

Yeah I knew that, it's cool that you know that.

Jacob you're tryna do what exactly? Make a statement?? TFOH thought I was reading rap battles not 8 lines of your garbage opinions and rambling nonsense.. That being said as a stand alone written piece, it was still trash. My vote is for Ray Zues.. this is a decent drop. You had some good setups and punches but not all of your multis were on point imo.. still outdid you're opponent by a landslide. 

ray just hit harder he got potential i f he put more punches here, jacob was kinda basic here no h8 ...fv

Ray takes this for an ambitious (if not always cleanly executed) battle verse.

Jacob, I'd love to have an argument over whether the LB text-battling scene has too-high demands on being formulaic and derivative, but a battle is not the place to do this. Use the forums.

Also don't worry about any votes you read from Newcastle, that's a troll account with 0 voting power.