[U]40killa[/U]

[I][B]Yall had him beatin me last time cus of a bunch of fuckin MULTIES, Im INSULTED..Got a tightrope for him, but its to strangle him with not WALK IT! You catch a backhand for BACK TALKIN..If I say I got his back that mean I made the gat take half his BACK OFF HIM! Ill bust shots so watch out cus he'll get "cropped" if B's(bees) SWARMIN IN THE FRAME..Lettin it pour, he tryna think of how to get out the crossfire he brainSTORMIN IN THE RAIN..[/B][/I]

decent opener but you didn't come out attacking him..good wordplay and setups and i like this one "You catch a backhand for BACK TALKIN..If I say I got his back that mean I made the gat take half his BACK OFF HIM" how you kept that "back" bit going while saying you would smack him around and then kill him. Maybe there are some deeper meanings there but I can't find them.

[I][B]"Ill bust shots so watch out cus he'll get "cropped" if B's(bees) SWARMIN IN THE FRAME.."[/B][/I]

i like this photo theme going on here; "shots" "cropped" "the frame" all nice references to photos/editing... is the "bees" a reference to your name here?--like, "Killer bees"? LOL if so thats good shit!

[I][B]Lettin it pour, he tryna think of how to get out the crossfire he brainSTORMIN IN THE RAIN.." this is nice too with the rain/pour/getting out (like running from the rain!! lol).On everybody battle talkin bout "inbox for an expo" tryna stack up IN THE QUOTAS..Decided since he cant be #1 in the text record he'll just get hella credits nd be #1 IN THE VOTERS! U tryna improve nd "sound off" but I still cant HEAR THE KILLS..It sad u got all this "drive" but no power to STEER THE WHEEL! [/B][/I]

Lol he's really swinging at Benny here! Like 40 is pissed off and saying he's got no skills and will never be number one--unless they start crowning "#1 voters" LOL Next is probably a dig at Benny's expos and how he talks a lot--"sound off" but he can't even "hear the kills"--all of his losses..? LOL! The last line "got all this Drive" (Benny just tryna improve out here!) but no power to STEER THE WHEEL...LOL saying he's got no business trying to be the best!!

[I][B]Run his pockets im takin everything of INTEREST..blow his brains out, leave his thoughts everywhere, he sharin his ideas like PINTEREST..his crew name MACK SPITTAZ wit one WACK MEMBER..He couldnt "spit a lick" to wash himself, so when I come to wet him up watch this CAT SKIMMER! He paid to be a premium member and complains how its NO PERKS..Guess he feeling "abandoned on the site" like JOE DIRT!! He finna take these hits like a COMPLIMENT..Benny wouldnt blow up from his raps if his rhymebook had a BOMB IN IT!![/B][/I]

good wordplay with the running pockets/interest--is this meant to be like a banking/money reference "pockets" like his bank account? Idk....the next line LOL "Blow his brains out, leave his thoughts everywhere 😆😆😆 ☠ good one!! Nice swings at his one man crew. Next talking about how he's a pussy and 40 gonna clean him up and send him running (like a cat from water!! HAHAHA!!) Continuing with the disses about Benny's activity on the site then the 'Joe Dirt' jab. The last line was a nice way to end it.. telling Benny he isn't going to be blowing up anytime soon LOL.

Overall, you stayed consistent with hurting this man all the way through. lol I like how you really used his own shit against him and it was clever too! I thought your multis were pretty good, wordplay and setups were good too. Your flow/delivery could have been better and it got a little "wordy" in some spots, specifically the opener, which i felt could have been stronger and it just sounds like you're salty about your previous loss to Benny! No hate tho! You filled the box with some good shit!

[U]Benny Lectric[/U]

[I][B]This week L'iL pip-squeak.. .. I'm MURDERING FOR SEVEN DAYS!! I'M FURTHER IN MY LEVEL'S RANK!! I'LL PURGE HIM WITH THE WEAPONS AIMED!! ..I'm Cooking 40killa.. I'M BURNING HIM FOR HEAVEN'S SAKE!! ..[/B][/I]

this opener had me like 😲!! this "week" lil' pip squeak "I'M MURDERING FOR SEVEN DAYS" he's coming right out with great attack and word play and setting up his next lines (God created the earth in 7 days) next he's gonna "PURGE HIM WITH THE WEAPONS AIMED" another nod to the bible here? I'm not religious so i don't know much about purging, but this miight also be referencing a "purge" maybe like the "Salem Witch Trials"? A bunch of so-called witches were burned at the stake--leading into his next line where he's burning 40:

[B][I]."I'm Cooking 40killa.. I'M BURNING HIM FOR HEAVEN'S SAKE!!... Maybe i'm just forming my own vision of his bars but he is definitely connecting his punches!!"..He Think highly of his product??.. stop PURCHASING THE DEVIL'S DANK!! If I get up and Adam I'ma HURT'EM IN A SPECIAL WAY!! ..Just because he blows Like a COLONEL IN A METAL TANK!! ..You ain't Eve'n Killa You a SERPENT!! ..KID'S A FEATHERWEIGHT!! ..beefing with a God.. "[/I][/B]

🔥WTF these bars are actually on fire!!! Keeping it going with the burning/bible theme while using excellent wordplay setups for each multi set.. I was floored by the "Adam and Eve" twist while also taking a shot at his opponent by using his name "you ain't Eve'n a Killa" WHAT?! "you a serpent"--another bible refernce with the snake from the Adam and Eve story while hitting a hard punch at the same time 🔥🔥I noticed that military refernce too, "blows like a Colonel...in a metal tank"!!--A little disconnected from the previous lines but still a nice hit.

[I][B]must be SEARCHING FOR A BELLY ACHE!! ..I'm CERTAIN THIS A CHECKER PLAY his WORDS ARE FROM THE SECOND GRADE,, EARNING HIM SOME MEDICAID like URBANS WITH A SECTION EIGHT!! ..Tell me when it Snap!! ..You ain't LEARNING?? ..[/B][/I]

moving out of the bible reference (i was unsure if this transistion was using the idea of the apple being eaten from Adam and Eve? Like now he's got a belly ache? Idk!) but now he's attacking him by telling him he's childish "searching for a belly ache" (little kids be getting their little "belly aches" lol) "checker play" (kids games) "words are from the second grade" (needs no expo lol) and he's broke "earning him some medicaid like urbans with a section 8"-- Medicaid and Section 8 are government programs for low income families, or poor people. and lastly, he's not smart because he "ain't learning" (cuz he's dumb with his second grade words lol) 🔥

[I][B]..THIS A LETTER GAME!! ..40 been as slow as mail SERVICE IN A HEAVY RAIN!! ..Failing his delivery he's NERVOUS WHEN THE WEATHER CHANGE!! ..Boy couldn't wreck if he was SWERVING TILL THE PEDAL BREAK!! ..He's the battle rap VERSION OF A WEDDING CAKE!! ..Every layer sweet.. and the VERSES WRITTEN NEVER ATE(8)!! ..Judging by the skill.. 40's WORKING WITH A LESSER RATE!! ..shorting him a ten?? ..yeah THIRTY IS A BETTER NAME!! ..Catch'em lookin fly?? ..He ain't BIRDING IN THE EVERGLADES!! ..He Rather Go Blind!! ..I HEARD HE IN TA ETTA JAMES!! ..[/B][/I]

"THIS A LETTER GAME"--a smooth transition from one idea to the next.. he "ain't learning" and "letter game" could be reference to school grades while also nodding to his postal/mail theme for the next set of lines. "slow as mail service in heavy rain" lol he's slow like the mailman!! And so on talking about how his delivery sucks lmao. I have to admit, aside from the "LESSER RATE" line (which is another nod to mail service with "rates") I felt the last set of lines didn't connect with eachother like the previous sets did. Still some strong stuff on its own though "shorting him a 10?? thirty is a better name" 😂😂. Nice Etta James touch at the end with the "'he'd' rather go blind"!!! GOOD SHIT!! But really though; what does "BIRDING IN THE EVERGLADES" have to do with "ETTA JAMES"?? LOL.With that being said, I do feel that you could have ended this stronger considering how you were weaving your other themes throughout the rest of the box.

Seriously though this is possibly the best battle I've read since I've been here.. Lol which is not very long.. but I've been lurking 🤣

yo, my bolds and italics let me down!! 😆😆 sorry for lookin sloppy y'all!!

this was a great battle buti got one taking it for more heavier punches. fair vote commenced.