Damn this was a nice read. doctordriedel had some nice punches, but ultimately I had 40 coming out on top with more content and clearer rhyming.

Doctordriedel I liked the religious theme you had going and I think it added to your verse. A big thing to work on is to avoid using any line breaks at all and fill up the whole box like 40 did here. Also, try to capitalise your rhyming words like 40's verse had, this makes your schemes clearer so things don't slip by people (this is important because people have lots of different accents they're used to hearing on LB). I thought your Humpty Dumpty ish was your best material.

40killa, solid work here. I really liked your opener and your closer. I do think it was a bit risky to spend your lines talking about blasphemer, it fit with the scheme but didn't bring you any closer to winning the battle and could have cost you dearly in a close battle like this. Overall a solid verse though with several hefty punches.

fair vote is in. inbox me for an expo if you would like one.