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Nice drop charan good read 

Nibba bro check your email I sent I a basic tutorial on structuring punches to be honest nibba this was better from you your getting better but it's still a bit all over the place best to start basic and work up, 

Just cap the syllable and words that rhyme .. So for example of u highlight AM I then THE SKY that'll work but what I put didn't fit cos I highlighted 4 words with 2

Instead of trynna freestyle for 8 lines try to think of 3 lots of 2 lots of 3 lines or just think of two dope punchlines and full the rest in anyway check ur mail I sent u and msg me back of u need more help

This was a complete murder scene. Charan took this battle with every category..dope from start to finish..flow was smooth as butter. TheRealest I had sum interesting concepts u just didn't make em come to life and work on connecting your multis with the same syllable count so ya verse won't be so choppy..basically take notes from your opponent..keep working!

One knows the mechanics of this shit and executed them very well. The other needs to understand the basic format in battle rap and how to properly setup his punches and rhyme in a more natural way.