Kiwi Peewee: Opening bar was smooth enough but wasn’t a punch in any shape. Second bar was nice, conceptually however for me the multi set had me re-reading it. Also feel ‘crowns’ a bit played on CakedOut at this stage. Next bar, this was a nice bar. Creative too. Ending bar was pretty slick, wasn’t much impact from it though. 

Overall: Not a bad drop, have seen better from you however. 

CakedOut: Opening was no more than a nice lil jab. Second bar was of a similar grade. Bar 3, Banger and Ranger don’t come close to rhyming, fam. Bang-Er, Rain-Ger. That bar is mute. Next bar, Wizard Kelly, has no clue who that was and had to google him. Always a bad move, imo if you use obscure references/references that only folks in your own country will get. Ending bar was a smooth concept, the multi is a bit forced, imo. 

Overall: Not a bad drop here. Few issues, your wording as certainly improved. 

Overall Battle: Not too impresses with this one, both have & can do better. Leaning towards Kiwi here, by a hair. This could pretty much be a coin toss. Fairs in, I’m out. 

MURDER

Got cakedout taking this one with some pretty serious heat. Edible arrangements was decent, but the white ranger and wizard kelly definitely hit. Kiwi I felt you kind of fumbled it here by calling yourself a fruit cake? That's how it read. Even if you meant it at caked, it was still pretty weak. Then you had the whole word splice ER thing which is one of teh most most played out old school name flip concepts and also just a reach imho the way it was done here. Rest was ok but caked was more consistent imo and had enough to win 

Dude this was a fire battle. I liked my losers unique punches along with some of his creative multis while the winner had so many jabs it was like Nate Diaz vs Anthony Pettis, phone booth style jabs that eat away from your stamina. Fire battle fairs in 

Yo this battle is class but first up I gotta say, bar of the battle is "don't book marks that ain't on the same page as me", but sadly that line was bitten verbatim from JC vs Danny Myers. 

Kiwi did good here I like the creativity and the opener was great, could have been worded to hit harder but really nice. Cake's crowns bar is fire too. Great verse. 

CakedOut aside from that obvious bite there's some nice stuff here. Animal on the blade, wedding dress etc. Good content. 

But easy to judge the winner when one dude is clearly biting. 

SQUAMMY

Guts vote removed at Cakes request. Guts is blocked and shouldn't of been able to vote. 

“animal on the blade” like THE WHITE RANGER/..

.a spine shot will have your “back hanging out” like a WEDDING DRESS//

these bars took it for me my vote is for cakedout

You've been judged to of bitten two bars in this verse from the Live Battler JC.

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=516283

Next time don't “book marks” who aren't on the ‘SAME PAGE AS ME’https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kVBRUF2Ockg

15:55

I'll have this “animal on the blade” like THE WHITE RANGER/https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ff7YMaMo0ZI

8:03Autowin for Kiwi.