Good luck, Student. Dope verse.

Only thing I think needs expo'd is Gohan was son of Goku, a Saiyan, and Master Roshi trained him.

Interesting battle here. I wasn't really feelin ones verse. Rhyme scheme felt off in places. A couple solid bars but the rest just didn't hit for me as a reader. I think the other had more bars that hit and less that didn't so that gets my vote. GL Fellas. 

ok nice spar here fellas. Felt one was really aimless and had strange formatting and no impact. Other was more consistant but not really at a high level. Fairs in. 1/

Cool little bout. Student was just a bit too choppy here and some of the multis didnt work. The bars seemed to lack metaphors as well and were just kind of statement-y. Brayne got it with a couple funny lines and smoother, cleaner writing.

Student™ - What the fuck was that bro? Your stuck on that old shit like me lol. Punches were so so, you had some nice wordplay, easy to read without having to re-read it a million times. Consistant all the way through. You used our old people Multies lol.

BD™ - I dont know what (TA) and (FA) is but the rest made sense. Punches was heavy and directly to the point. Nice strong aggression until you said #stillloveyoubro lol. Good verse though fam

FV In Fellahs™

Expo: Arya (Stark) is a Faceless Men (Assassins who change their face) who stabs the Night King in Game of Thrones. His old user name is Bome Daddy. Tom Sawyer is a song by the group Rush from their album Moving Pictures. Doug Funnie is the main character from the cartoon Doug, his alter ego is Quailman, who fights crime in his underwear.

felt the winner had the harder hitting lines when it came to punchlines both had decent rhymes but to me winner edged it His ending fv 

Not the greatest battle here from either but I still had a clear winner. Student, you started off with some atrocious broken multis, which pretty well lent credibility to what Brayne Ded said about you being here for 15 years without growth. For punches, we had stuff that was too obscure (Tom Sawyer/Rush) and/or used a forced setup to shoehorn in the concept (Night King, Doug Funny). Nothing in here hit hard. As for Brayne Ded, you didn't have any real screen-melters here, but I did think you at least kept a level of readability and entertainment that Stu didn't. I also liked the personal angle in the opener better than I probably should have. Closer was pretty funny too. Fair's in.

Student your opener was actually dope, i thought it wasn't going to be any good cuz of the 2 syllable rhyming, but that was my fav bar from you. The bars after that didn't hit that hard for me. I liked the are ya/arya wp but the punch could've been written better.

Brayne who had some good ideas, i dig the DBZ scheme, but the punches just weren't as good as the set ups. I felt like you were powering up for a haymaker but then shit just kinda landed flat for me. No disrespect, the rhyming & structure was good but the punches just didn't do much.

I got stu edging this thang. Fairs in fellas.

Student - Well for starters it seems there is a bit of rust or lackadaisical writing in there. Pretty much every bar in the verse needed some sort of work or was just too simple. Some of the other concepts probbaly could have worked into decent punches if they were setup and a bit creative.. (GoT, Sawyer, Doug) ones. 

Brayne - Decent drop. Thought the first 2 bars could have been real strong if they were worded a bit better. Personal concept in the opener I liked. DBZ bar was meh, closer was okay, just didn't hit hard for me. 

Overall - Battle was pretty light here for a LBT. I thought brayne put his punches together a bit better here, his verse in general was just a smoother read for me as well. 

Student, I almost respect your lack of elevation at this point lmao. A lot of really simple stuff and the rhyming was very bizarre. Some little punchline ideas scattered in there though.

Brayne, are you related to Stu? Haha this verse reminded me a lot of his. Weird punchline ideas, if they were to be called punchlines, but you did have a notch above in rhyming.

This really comes down to the rhyming alone and Brayne was a little bit more together.