Map: nice smooth bars, cool punches. Need to watch the ‘he’ ‘you’ in bars when speaking to opponent, wrong grammatically. Other than that, solid drop. 

Trade: first bar was nice conceptually but the coma changed the punchline from making the ‘suspicious talkers actually wow/ gasp/ recoil at the level of gossip’ to  saying the columns he writes makes suspicious talkers’. Next bar is a flat line. No idea what a Greek church mission is. Ending bar seemed to have something there but wasn’t executed to its potential. 

Overall: one sided battle here. Fairs in, I’m out. 

EXPO - I'll leave this "monk" in ruins like SHAOLIN TEMPLES ... (Where he is Reppin)

I'm a felon - his last thoughts like "fuck" why they ALLOW HIM PISTOLS before TM

(Again - where he is reppin, 36 chambers) - empties "36 chambers" in his "heart" (wow)

(Monks Vow Over Scrolls with Sacred Symbols) - make him DEVOW THEM SYMBOLS!!!//

Since i need to add a Expo :)

Felt as if winner got the punchlines and setups loser didn't really have anything good besides his opening the rest was aight but winner got it for me

The opening line won this for me. Malishus known as a beast around LB, dude can jab you until your out of breath and can't take the beating no more. Clear winner, not saying one dude wasn't hard, but he sure wasn't hard enough for his opponent here yO

LoD

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Mal: nice opener. the rest had a just enough to get the job done feel. ite.

TM: you got your format and rhyming down. buuuut keep working on those punches and concepts. youre getting there bro. Read some Rieper and RULE battles.

voting Malishus over TM here. Mal displayed a better ability to punch with purpose. I didn't feel any of the power in TM's bars

this right here needs to improve, im not trynna be hard my nikkas but ou need to step up you game and have tha word play ot some how pay the bills

Winner had easy to read verse and cool set up. A ok personal from the jump . Had better scheme then loser also fairs in