YxngBreezey failed to format her verse in any sort of fashion let alone fill-in the entire box. Her lines were very simple, limited to only one syllable per rhyme and had no noticeable setup incorporated into them. The only thing here really worth mentioning was the directness towards her opponent.

Jester Joke, unlike his opponent, actually filled the entire box here. The responder also had a tiny bit more complexion in his verse ranging from two-syllable multi's here & there as well as being able to flip some aspects of his opponent's verse. Neither emcee here really had any noticeable writing skills at all. 

Don't worry, at the end of the day this is a ranked battle afterall. 

Breezy when you battle bro. Its best to fill the box completely. Atleast you did rhyme. Some people dont even do that. FV In Fellahs

Yxng - basically no verse. Not really a way to feed that other than that. Read some other battles, learn how to contruct punches, better rhyme schemes and fill the box up to get the most out of it. 

Jesters - filled the box at the very least. There was a lot of filler in your verse that could have been utilized to throw punches at your opponent. The punch attempts that were there are basic. 

MVGT: Jesters - For obvious reasons here. Basically had a verse against an empty box.