expo-theres a reference to a t v show. its about a guy who goes in nature and learns to survive. he s known for eating a larg e sort of bug in one of his scenes. 

apple off his eye

alright Rican

andre c auto-loses this for being banned for good reason. Nonetheless, TheDeterminator put the work into a verse, so it only seems fair I'll give feedback on that.

Your flow and rhyming was really smooth and clear here, but you went a long time without punchlines. Your first actual punch came at "eat the bark", around halfway through your verse. Try to have about 1 punch per bar instead of having filler content that rhymes but doesn't have any double meanings and flips. The two punches you did bring were well-developed and hit hard, but there were a couple of wording issues. For instance, don't use "/" instead of "and" because people couldn't do that reading or speaking it, it doesn't work. A solid verse but it was lacking in punchlines for the first half.

the determenator has avery good punching styles and words he as well has a good rhymes accociated to the subject