Barrett M82 is a snipea

gl tyrone

man this is the first time i read a verse from dizzdadog and i'm thinking where has this guy been all this while damn he got one of the best balanced verses i have seen from the point of it being effective in text battling and audios both !!! god damn very well knit multis man all evenly syllabled very good shit here. punchwise the wimbledon concept was nice but the wording was a little forced while the black hole inspite of being a played out concept seemed fresh coz of the wording while the closer was nice too just gotta sharpen up the punch flips a little more with a few set ups prolly and we are definitely looking at an LBT contendor here while Tyrone that hairline line was sick thats the kind of lines you should have ore of along with better multis and set up wchich gives closure to any punchline coz without closure the punchlines just seems weak but yes this is the first time i have seen you trying to work with punch concepts and believe me i am so happy man ur on the right track just add on the multis and set ups bro ur gonna be a legit bad ass soon !! dizz gets my vote for this one for today tho all the very nest to both for their future battles and endeavours !!

Clear winner . One outshined his opponent in every category. Tyrone step ur multies up n get some set up lines for the harder punch! 

Fair vote 

DizzDaDoggfakeaccount, you have an understanding of multis and a very simple concept of punchlines, but whether you are DissDaBiter or someone pretending to be him, you have been here long enough to be further ahead.

Tyrone, I think this one was a little bit worse than the other two I read. Less rhyming going on here so I think you need to focus on keeping the lyricism aspect of the verse alive.