Close ads battle fellas giving it to the one I liked a little better here my fair is always tossed respect to both

Well damn 

Good luck killa

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a lifeboat 

It's cool let's get this show on the road

Thought Jimmy was just cleaner here and with more consistent, harder hitting punches. Adolf, I think the titanic line was pretty decent. But the wording on the guillotine punch left a lot to be desired, not to mention the multi was broken (5 sylls turned to 4). Thought the closer was kind of funny, but not really impactful.  Jimmy kind of had an average verse for his standards. But bars like the piccolo, AS, Wheel of Fortune were cleanly worded, executed, and had enough power to over-take what dolf brought. Good drops here and look forward to seeing what both do going forward in the season.

PYW Season 3 - Week 1

My winner had the better quality of punchlines. My loser had bars that stretched a little to long. Votes in

Adolf - the titanic bit was creative not reallyfelt like a punch coz it was so stretched while the french guillotine stuff was more of a flex man, i liked the your closer. but a lot of your concepts were kinda let down by the lackluster setups bro. also in the case with the titanic loss you could have avoided capping taking ya and taking a that would have made ur multi seem much better coz only the relevant punch was a multi that adds tonnes to the line. this is just an example, i have been facing the same issues lately lol

Jimmy - i dnt think i got the gold medalist, also not sure if a wooden pole could be referred to as a tree bark but the piccolo regeneration twist was unexpected and pretty funny which kinda made up for most of the bar. other than these two lines, the rest was really good with really well flipped personals which was the stand out aspects in it. my personal fav and the BOTB was the ASL bit just not sure if the sex and location and extra ovations bit rhyme well enough for my ears tho.

also i envy how you guys manage to post ur verses without typos unlike me lol

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Thank for da support fam

Adolf: Opener was ok. It felt like your setup outshined the actual punch. Great ideas but the ending needed more POP. I'd still call it a good bar. Guillotine was cool. The French Guillotine bit was there but the wp needs to work both ways. "Will Beheading For This Bitch" sounds a bit off in sense of grammar. Gotta be careful with that these days. Still ike the line tho. Not gonna lie your closer sounded mad awkward. Wording issues in the setup really threw the whole punch off. "Recline ya mans"? What I would do with the punch is imply he'll be "biting a bullet" or chewing his toungue or SOMETHING.  implant the idea to the reader that Jimmy's eating something THEN execute the punch.

Jimmy: like the opener. small complaint is that due to the fact Mark Spitz has an s at the end of his name "if you seeing this person spits in the water" sounds a tad off. DBZ reference was good. AS L bar was ite but your closer was dope. one of those lines that would have been amazing with a longer setup, but i digress. 

Good battle guys. I felt this one was very close. My winner edge it out only due to the fact that his opponent slipped up a LITTLE more. Great read, high rates for hot list.

Awesome battle both emcees did do their thing with different styles im just leaning to who i feel edged it with slightly better concepts and execution. The fair is in

 both fire.. one was just non stop fire.. other one just fell thru on a couple jabs for me personally

This is bar for bar. Very close battle but leaning towards Spitter hear as he more punch impact imo.

Imo one was ahead the whole way through his verse. Very consistent,  nothing that blew my wig back or anything, all around better bars.

Botb imo was.. 

Slide his corpse over a wooden pole, the tree BARK'LL RIP THIS LAME'S SKIN, you'll see the "limb poppin' out his body" like Piccolo's ARM REGENERATION!