EXPO - 'SPECIAL DELIVERY' IS THA MOST EXPENSIVE WAY TO POST SOMETHING IN THA UK, AND WE SAY 'POSTMAN' INSTEAD OF MAILMAN. ONCE YOU REMOVE 'K K' FROM HIS NAME YOUR LEFT WITH 'OLD RHYMEZ'.

NICE BARS, GL DUDE.

Both were about equal in terms of execution. Kold Krhymez's punch were maybe a bit more "clever," but I was having trouble working out what some of them were supposed to mean. Like, homie's side collapse / crime case with no leads? I've had this problem with your verse before - something ALMOST makes sense, but not quite. HVK's punches, on the other hand, were all easy to grasp, even though I didn't like them. Also, I know you say Alasker, bro. That's the UK for you - every word is pronounced with an R at the end of it, unless the word has an R at the end of it. Anyway. Fair's in.

Hvk

KK: first bar your really pushing it with the multi choice and the wp. I appreciate the idea but your forcing it. Overall I feel your problem is coming up with rhyming multis that sound awkward when isolated. Prepped on D Deceit? Mind is losing aura? Your punches have solid ideas but if you work on the build up you’ll see miles in improvement. HV: pretty good execution starting off. The mail post execution could have been better but the setup was nice. Ender was pretty crack. Overall here my winner won out with cleaner buildup in terms of execution and multis. Good fight guys.

GOOD BATTLE!! THIS WAS THE SHIT!!! 

an once i "remove K K from tha scene?" ppl will see ya jus "OLD" WITH THA "RHYMEZ!"/

^^ god dayum!!! god dayum!!! wtf dayum!!!

why the fuck have u not been battling man :O

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i'll Shoot tho, till YOUR MIND IS LOSING AURA, the sounds will make 'Soul Rock & Hip Pop' w/out COMBINING MUSIC GENRES.

^ this would have been a lot better if used against seul lol

cos this 'retard' heard his girl say 'foot the bill', so he STEPPED ON THE RECEIPT!!

^ this was seriously funny but the lack of a personal twist made it feel just funny and nice instead of lethal and dayum!! nah i mean?

"cold crimes on tha rise?" is a gang of igloo "ROBBERS IN ALASKA!"

this was nice coz of the personal twist and the crisp multi it went with along with the set up but a played concept against kold.

other than that both had lows in their verse where i found kold's first two bars and HVK's postman stuff which felt a little too stretched. but it's the personal references conceptualization from HVK which gets him MFV here. this is actually a high quality battle coz i could feel the intended content at play everywhere which kinda didn't surface in certains and really ripped in others.

this was the two guys have one of the best versions of two old school styles in texts.

please keep battling man!!

tough battle homies it was very close but i have HVK with harder hitting battle fv BSA

well nobody is gettin the homie side/Homicide wp so here it is lol

Both battlers here came with very solid verses but had some room for improvement.

KK: The "homie side/homicide" wordplay was a bit of a stretch. The vowels in "homie/homi-" don't match in any accent I've ever been aware of. That being said, I decided to give you the benefit of the doubt that it did work just in case your accent is one I haven't heard. Just always make sure when you're doing wordplay that it works perfectly. Some of your multies also just felt a bit non-sensical. What does "your mind is losing aura" mean? Giving the wordplay the benefit of the doubt, your opener was your best bar on both execution and concept. Your closer was executed fine, although the "foot the bill/step on the receipt" wordplay is used just like that in an Eminem song from 2010. Not saying you're biting or anything, just that the concept isn't exactly fresh.

HVK your opener was cleanly executed, although it wasn't the strongest conceptually. I'm torn on the "cold crimes on the rise" wordplay; it was very simple but at the end of the day I think it was also quite effective, although not close to being a haymaker. The scheme-punch-combo you came out with next was really solid. I'm no expert on UK-postal-system-nomenclature so I'll take your word for it that it worked logically, the scheme definitely came off cleanly and the punch really landed hard imo, probably the botb. Your closer was also quite nice, although it suffered from the same thing as your opener. If you're going to set-up a punchline over several lines, make sure you include the build-up to the punch over all the lines, not just setting up the rhyme like you did here.

All in all I think HVK's wordplay came off a little more cleanly and his punches landed harder, which gave him the edge.

Execution about even. Rhyming about even. HVk won because he reached less and had better wording. KK had potential but had this weird shit about D everywhere and just weird writing. Hard to make out what some things were supposed to mean. Closer was an absolute reach too. Lol. Fairs in.