lazy writing squad in the building 

forgot a comma after "verse be on"

i see be on dudes profiles .. dl checkin  ..ctfu yung stalker type..lmao!!

This is a tie imo. Savage society gunna had a solid flow , he had some lines that hit like the hot dog one. You have your own style thats dope  But try to incorporate more punchlines. Good flow , take your time and write better.

Colossal had sick concepts like the first responder. The multies were off before the donkey kong punch.

Voting for neither. I call it a tie.

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MUCH BETTER FROM SAVAGE, STILL ALOT OF REPEATED RHYMES LIKE ''DOG'' AND ''OFF'' WHICH WAS USED ALOT, BUT I LIKED YOUR ''HOTDOG'' CONCEPT AN LIKE HOW YOU ATTEMPTED TO CARRY THA CONCEPT OVER THA WHOLE BAR, DELIVERY AN EXECUTION STILL NEEDS A LIL WORK BUT YOU ARE DEFO ON A BETTER PATH NOW DUDE.  ONE BIT OF ADVICE IS IN YOUR FIRST BAR WHEN YOU SAID ''running threw rookies ,like GoldenState in the PLAYOFFS.'' INSTEAD OF SAYIN ''RUNNING THREW ROOKIES'' SAY ''RUNNIN THROUGH THIS ROOKIE'' SO YOU DIRECT IT AT YOUR OPPONANT, WHEN YOU TALK GENERICALLY IT CAN MAKE IT SEEM LIKE YOU SELF-HYPIN AN CAN MAKE A BATTLEVERSE LOOK MORE LIKE A CYPHER, ACTUALLY DIRECTING ATTACKS AT YOUR OPPONANT WILL MAKE YOUR BARS HARDER, JUS SOME FRIENDLY ADVICE YOU DONT HAVE TO TAKE IT IF YA DONT WANT TO........ MINI HAD SOME GOOD IDEAS IN HIS VERSE ACTUALLY, ''DONKEY KONG'' WAS A GOOD IDEA AND ALSO THA ''FIRST RESPONDER'', I ALSO LIKED YOU QUOTIN A LINE FROM A PREVIOUS BATTLE AS YOU TRIED TO GET PERSONAL, WHAT I DIDNT LIKE THO WAS YOUR RHYMES OR LACK THERE OF, COULDNT FIND WHAT ''DONKEY KONG'' ''FIRST RESPONDER'' OR ''ONE BATTLE'' RHYMED WITH?, WHICH MADE FOR A DIFFICULT READ...... ALL IN ALL ITS A CLOSE CALL, MINI HAD THA BETTER IDEAS AND CONCEPTS BUT HAD LITTLE TO NO RHYMES.  SAVAGE HAD THA BETTER FLOW AN ACTUALLY HAD RHYMES WITHIN HIS VERSE AND HE ALSO ATTEMPTED SCHEMING A CONCEPT OVER A WHOLE BAR....... IM SLIGHTLY LEANIN TOWARDS SAVAGE HERE MAINLY BECAUSE OF THA LACK OF RHYMES FROM HIS OPPONANT, TOUGH DECISION THO.....SAVAGE GETS MY VOTE, FAIR IS DROPPED!

With the way it's formatted it looks like CM has a lot more content. But if you copy and paste these verses into a text box, ssg has 6, nearly 7 lines and CM has just over 7 lines. So they actually have nearly the same amount of content (why EITHER have less than 8 lines makes no sense to me though). So taking that out of the equation, ssg just had better rhyming and better attempts at punches. SSG takes it.

goodlooking on votes!! #100

Punches were pretty even. I was feeling savages flow and tighter verse.