fk ya right mafuca it was a cypher shit!

Winner here was more polished and delivered a more potent verse, loser her has come a long way improving his game but fell short due to not really having any direct hitters imo. So the fair is in certi 

Problem areas for both. Chekkit had less of them with a bit more clearly defined punches. Bobby's multis were chopped up. Some OK ideas but didn't convert them into punches or anything. 

CHEKKIT I LIKED YOUR INNER RHYME SCHEMES AND I LIKED MOST OF THA OUTER RHYMES TOO, ESPECIALLY AT THA END.  ''HIT SOME SHIT FOR NICE WHILES'' WAS VERY FORCED AN MAKE LITTLE SENSE, ALSO THA FIRST TWO RHYMES WERE A LIL IFFY, APART FROM THAT I THOUGHT THA WAS A DECENT VERSE...... BBH SAME ADVICE AS BEFORE, ATTACK YOUR FRICKEN OPPONANT NEXT TIME!!!! LOL, SERIOUSLY THO YOUR STRUCTURE IS IMPROVIN ALOT SO ONCE YOU CAN GET A ACTUAL BATTLEVERSE LAYED OUT YOU'LL BE ON A SOLID PATH...... CHEKKIT GETS THA VOTE HERE, FAIR IS DROPPED!

Chekkit - the missionary play is way too played so that was a low in ur verse, also i am not sure if the shrink and ice piles bit worked well enuf with the nice while in the middle but the best part of ur verse was the finisher liked that one.

Bobby - since this is the third battle of urs i am voting on today and i see you going the jay diamond way in the second half of your verse now :O were you cyphering the second half after getting bored with writing the first half?  i dnt know, either way ur verse had the same disconnected lines which were high on the self hype too this time and most of ur concepts and imagery tho good get lost coz the way u execute them with ur rhymes. 

Fairs in.