HEADHUNTERS !!

PUNISH shit !!!

yep just the heat  expected from you, nice one bone. 

A MINOR CORRECTION IN MY VERSE - 

meant to say TO SCHEME N SLEDGE JEW SONS 

rest is as it is. Holla if anybody need expos or anything.

Good luck, broh.

Thanks fam same to you too !

nicklesh, da see wafes sewages ting didnt nearly work, and ur multis were pretty broken,especially the 1st set

gettin multies right aint a bonus its a minimum, like a bare necessity of a passable verse

 decent shit from brayne, guess he knew it wudnt take much, did a fair amount with da scheme, only criticism bein that the setups were mad long and stunted the rhythm a bit

anyway, clear winner on some light work ting

nicklesh, if u gonna send tht smoke u gonna have 2 come harder than this bro

Nikleshaman good

TWC HAS POTENTIAL, YOU HAVE TO WATCH THA SYLLABLE COUNT ON YOUR MULTIS THO DUDE, ''HIS-SHIT-MAY-SEEM-PLUMB-TO-SOME''(7syllable) - ''THIS-KID-PAY-N-BLEED-DEAD-THROUGH-PUNS''(8syllables), ITS THA SAME WITH THA NEXT MULTI TOO THEY ARE SLIGHTLY BROKEN DUDE, AND ''SEE WAGES - SEWAGES'' ARE BOTH SAID COMPLETELY DIFFERENT FROM EACHOTHER SO FOR ME THAT DOSENT WORK EITHER, YOUR GOOD WITH EXPANDIN ON CONCEPTS THO AN I LIKE YOUR STYLE, JUS FOCUS ON MATCHIN YOUR MULTI SYLLABLES AN MAKIN SURE WORDPLAYS SOUND THA SAME BOTH WAYS AN YOU'LL BE ON A SOLID PATH...... NICE TO SEE BD ROCK A SCHEME THROUGHOUT THA ENTIRE 8LINES, MY FAV PART WAS THA ''GRATE WITH THA WORDPLAY'' PART THAT WAS REAL DOPE, NICELY CONSISTANT FROM TOP TO BOTTOM TOO..... BD GETS THA VOTE HERE BUT A GOOD READ FROM BOTH SIDES, FAIR IS DROPPED!

NON EXPO VOTE DELETED.

Fv

ur right HVK, i should have given that wp second thoughts just went on with the way it is pronounced in my part of the world lol