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SUMO HAD ALOT OF BROKEN RHYMES, I DIDNT HAVE A FAV PART FROM YOUR VERSE TBH.  NEXT TIME TRY AN STAY AWAY FROM THA ''FARTS'' AND ''ANUS IN YOUR SPINE'' LINES AN TRY AN ACTUALLY COME UP WITH DECENT PUNCHLINES AN SET THEM UP...... I LIKE HOW COMETH USED THA SAME RHYME SCHEME THROUGHOUT, MY FAV PART WAS THA ''ORPHANAGE'' ''ABORTIN THIS CUNT'' LINE....... SUMO COULD TAKE A FEW POINTERS FROM HIS OPPONANTS VERSE HERE..... FAIR IS IN!

Vote: Cometh wins for attempting multi’s that make sense, a... loose... knowledge of what punchlines are and better formatting, as well as not having insults sounding like they came from a school playground. Eminem (how dare you disgrace Eminem) had no clue what he was doing in the battle, and it’s quite evident here. His multi’s were broken, and that’s saying it lightly. Most of your “multi’s” were either broken syllable wise or rhyming wise, the entirety first half of your verse was evidently of this, with the syllable count of each diss seemingly changing each time, to rhyming “nuts” with “suv”. Cometh, your shit didn’t impress me to be honest. You had pretty good knowledge of multi’s, though aborted this cunt had an extra syllable in the multi. You’re punchlines were basic too, though you displayed basic knowledge of how to write a punchline. Next time follow this format (as an example): You couldn’t “(wordplay or metaphor)” if you were “(flip)”. 

Botb: “Orphanage Son” (Not a proper punchline but none are really)

Scheme of the battle: “Boring As Fuck”

Advice: To both of you, contact @BURDENS , @guts , @all-Boro or another one of the greats on the site that teach rookies what they know for extra help.