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Automatic loss for Frosty. You didn’t fill the the entire 32, you didn’t even fill it 1/3 of the way, so automatic loss right there. But I guess I’ll still rate both anyway.

Frosty: You’re verse left me speechless, and not in a good way. Firstly, you didn’t fill in even a 1/3 of the space. In any battle that’s an instant loss, as you didn’t follow the rules of the battle. Secondly, when you say “I am feces” you are dissing yourself, as feces is shit, and saying your feces is basically saying your shit. Thirdly, Ouijah is pronounced “Oui (like in French) - Jah (like in Jahseh.). Fourthly, almost all of your multi’s are broken rhyming wise. Example, Midi isn’t even close to rhyming with Treat We’ll. Ouija doesn’t rhyme with anything else in your verse either. Fifth, make sure your disses are directed at your opponents. None of your disses were direct hits at the opponent. Also make sure to fucking ditch the self-hype lines, unless it’s for a set-up. You did have some good concepts such as the sweet line, but it had a horrible execution.

+ Good concepts

- Didn’t fill box

- Broken Multis Rhyme wise

- Some lines diss himself 

- Bad execution

Sweetlips: The only reason you won was because he didn’t fill the box and dissed himself. Your verse was weak overall, and the only pro is that you formatted everything properly and capped your multi’s. Firstly, you need expo’s. How did brittney lose her dignity ten years ago? Secondly you had too many lines where the rhyming was really loose. Blushingly doesn’t rhyme at all with Reliablility. This also brings me to my third point, make sure your multi’s not keep the same syllable count. Reliability is 6 syllables, blushingly is 3. Fourthly, use personal disses. If the diss is directed at the person, it hits a lot harder.

+ Good formatting

+ Capped multis

- Broken multi’s syllable wise

- Broken multi’s Rhyme wise

- Need more personals

- Needs expo’s.

Ack, realised this is 16, oops. Props to you though sweet lips for making a 16 that didn’t suck at the end. Most aren’t able to achieve that feat.

its figurative language like "i am the shit" smh

and Oujia is pronounced Weegee board in a lot

sweetlips filled the whole, did much better than her previous 16s i think. more effort here, frosty wouldve kept up if he filled the box. fill da box next time. fv no h8

Sweetlips got this for actly filling the box, had frosty even filled his box with fillers and jabs those ouija and diabetes lines were enuf to get him a win but coz unfortunately a 16 bar battle need 16 bars mandatprily from both participants this is a one sided battle coz frosty loses on points here coz sweetlips 16 opportunities to score and frosty just 4 or 5.

Fairs in.

Expo: Cosby attack- Bill Cosby was a famous family man/actor/comedian who was years later accused of drrugging and raping many women. which made them GROGGY but not from the JACK cuz he was drugging them with pills.

"u challenged me last week and then took it back" - Frosty challenged me a few weeks ago then took it back.

Britney spears 10 years ago beat a car with an umbrella in front of paprazzi after shaving her head bald

Martha stewart was a famous cook/housewife like woman who got lockked up for fraud