Not bad for being new bro, nice work

Respect

Thanks! Do you have any feedback or advice for what I should improve on?

You Saii, thx for the honest feedback, I underestimated my opponent, thought since he new he'd not come so ready, but that's no excuse, my opponent did a nice job covering the basic of battling, 

Thought one had a better punch structure and wording. Neither really had any standout punches. Going with the one that was smoother. Fairs in.

BRB...creating killers!!!!

Both came hard but i had 2 show luv

Dope battle here but I have my winner off the first read fairs in

TYR was more simplistic and predictable..multies and punches won my vote 

Think TYR went hella light with the 1 syll rhymes and not really converting any of his set ups into real punchlines. Lil Talent was more put together and developed here. I think a proper rematch may be in order.

Upon clicking this I didn't think the battle would turn out this way.

TYR, I have seen so much better from you in the past. This is really weak man. Do better next time. 

I have to give this to Lil Talent because, well, he was talented enough to structer his verse in a way that had more hard hitting jabs. He also had some OK multi's as well.