Decent leaning this way for better structure mini I like what you put forth but you should attack more fairs in

Frawsty was hella hilarious with his approach I felt Mini just the brush/ flossing, Snow Scheme was a lil bit of an overkill for me.. felt Frawsty still had beter lines.. 

Both need to work on every aspect of battle rap.. Frawsty had the multies but they could've been better.. Both need to work on creativity, metaphors, punchlines, concepts, build-ups and structure..

It's hard to bring myself to vote for a ridiculous gimmick verse over an actual verse, but ColossalMini's verse was so bland that I think I have to. Colossal, this wasn't a truly BAD verse, but there wasn't anything really memorable in it. Also, you need to capitalize your multis, bro. Frawsty, the part about "don't make this go from rape to murder" wasn't a punch, but it was more hilarious than like 98 percent of the punches on LB so I'll pretend like it is. The rest of the shit in your verse wasn't really good, but it got the job done. Fair's in.

Thought Frawsty was quicker to the punch and had the superior rhyming and flow throughout hs verse. The snow in the south bar was my favourite. Thought it was pretty funny in terms of how it was worded lmao. ColossalMini I liked the half a car / wheel of fortune line, i've seen the same concept but not flipped that way. Try to set up your punches a bit more so that they hit harder. Check out some of the tournament battles and see how some of the experienced battlers are setting up their verses, it'll be beneficial for you. I am leaning towards Frawsty on this one. Good battle yall, fairs in.

I've actually got Frawsty ahead here with the comedy angle. I get that it's a gimmick but in this case it actually worked because he was quick to his lines and they were witty with a decent flow. Mini was just a bit too basic and generic here to really generate must interest from the reader, and stuff was just sounding broken off the read. fairs.

my winner showed excogitate and less gasconading invited some idiosyncratic and magnanimous belonging to one's peculiar loser who had an individual character but not enough luminescent which the winner clear had as he jizzed all over this battle FAIRZ IZ JIZZINN !