FURious!

Come On Man,  KGs Verse Was Smooth.  Nothing OMG Dope But I Bobbed my Head to a Couple Of those Lines. Nice Job Kid.  To my Loser,  your verse was Very Lackluster.  Try reading other battles and taking notes On Structure.  Good luck,  good battle,  KEEP SPITTIN! 

Kg had an okish verse. Punches were fairly basic. Multis were decent. Fitz didnt use the whole box, spent a lot of time hyping and didnt really use well set up punches. Got kg on this one.

"You ugly cunt!" Literally the best way to start off a verse ever, period, no exceptions.

LOL alright let's take this seriously now. Writing up a quick one for this battle as I don't feel like an extended expo is at all necessary. 

KG, had some fucking FUNNY punchlines that hit hard as fuck compared to his opponent's. He structured his verse way better and I felt like his opponent's verse was really bland, as if he didn't really try too much even though it wasn't too bad. 

You have potential Fitzy, and definitely a lot of improving to do. Fair vote.

Gotta give it to KG for better structure and punches Fitzy wasn't bad needs work in few areas kinda cypherish IMO fairs in

This one is obviously KGs for having 2x the content and it being Better. Other dude lacked any structure or any semblance of a punch.

and this is why i dont write... im not a writter LOL... but mehh.... that dont mean i will back down. But this will be the first and last time i do a text battle

Loser: Firstly, use all the applicable space for a rap battle, and a rap battle only. Don't relate to your self AT ALL, unless it is to underdemine your opponent. However you didn;t do this in your opener. You shoudn't say "I'm" refering to yourself, only if it is to attack. The clown line was probs the best line you've got; and I'm being generous. Although on the clown line you should've added something referring to clowns. Such as setup and punch.

E.g. Setup "Better call him a clown"

E.g. Punch "Cause this faggot's verses are a straight up joke.'

Faggot meaning "colours'.. Idk man I'm just tryna help another aussie but you also NEED TO CAPITALIZE YOUR RHYMES.

Winner: Good verse overall, you had some spots which were slightly forced rhymes but most of those were fillerish. The opener and finisher were solid.

MVGT: KG

Fitzy said he's not a writer and it shows. He'd probably best stick to audio battling honestly. KG was above his opponent in every way here. Fair's in.

Kg taking this wit veteran verse. Fitsy had the simple shit low syllable counts ect. Gb fv

Nice bars KG.

KG ... got this