MvH

Expo:

- Banshee: is an X-man, who's power is to scream loudly.

- Eric Harris: One of the two columbine shooters.

GL bro, PhoSevPho

This is a really hard battle to vote on. Bnas had really no punches and his wording is so unnatural that it really hurt him here. Walking more hurtin? what does Charlie clips have to do with this battle, and why is he fucking nickles wife? And why is he fucking her with eventual rhymes, and most importantly the fuck could that possibly mean?

Nickle, you opened with like a 17 syllable multi. It's almost impossible to word a 17 syllable multi naturally and have it read well but even if you did it wouldnt matter because that's just way too many syllables inbetween actual rhyming words. It doesnt work and that negates like almost the first half of your verse. You did have a couple little comparisons in the end of your verse that were actually coherent. 

Both battlers gotta step up. Use double entendre, get a bit more creative with the concepts. This was pretty amature.

bothbut bnas "walkin more hurtin" dosent makesense, n u gettin morehoney is kinda self hype but bust dudes couch dat was funny n u were consistant w/ this verse so thats a pointer there. nickles u have potential, but ur first lines were overwelmingly long multis was unneccesary n really messed up da flow. n took away from da rest of da verses where ur rhymes were a bit shortened. u have good ideas just dont make em too long or short. fair vote h8

Nickle was just a bit better here. Bnas just seemed basic by comparison and wasn’t punching with anything too clever. Nickle had better structure to his verse and set up his punches better. His verse also just sounded more polished and was presented a bit better.