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This Wasn't a Hard Decision here.  Pocket,  the Scheming in the beginning was Crack!  No flaking that but the end fell off majorly for me.  Ammo,  GIRL YOU'VE COME A LONG WAY!! this was one of your better Verse but still had a part or two that didn't rhyme

 Still,  GREAT BATTLE. Y'ALL. 

Close battle. Fairs in. One had decent fresher concepts. 

tight one. Pocket got this one by being a bit smoother in their wording and rhyming.

Also had a bit more entertainment value to the verse but both were funny.

Felt picks punches were a bit tighter, like the pickpocket one was tough.

Both went for the disrespect but Pocket was a bit more aggressive as well. 

So I got pocket

Going with POCKET on this one, I felt more effort went into his bars, Multies were nice an he stayed direct. Ammo it was kinda like you rushed your bars here, with Multies not matches no the syllable count an punches that weren’t much of a hit in my opinion. Definitely seen better from you. Anyway my vote is in, gl to both.

Concepts:

Pocket had some funny shit in there. Last bar was your most creative one here. Felt like you took this one easy, with better setups that were relevant across your whole bar.

Ammo, you had some cool ideas here and there. What was troubling tho, was the way you presented them. Nothing out of this world, but what you did have could've been executed a lot better.

Execution:

Pocket, your wording was nice and nothing really stood out, except for the second line. Did you mean 'shit looks like TART AND COLE MIXED' - 'shit looks' followed by the multi just doesn't seem right. Your wp was nice, it's like you're tryna get that shit played before it's used against you haha. 

Ammo, I lol'd @ 'rhymator' but it's not a word so it's gonna turn some heads. Also, quite a few of your multis were either broken or stretched. E.g. 'COCKY EXTRAS [4 syllables] // TOXIC AVENGERS [5 syllabes]' ... and ... 'TRUE INTENTION // THOUGH A PERSON [PERSON / TENTION doesn't rhyme]' Your wording wasn't as smooth as Pocket's, ideas were there but the execution wasn't.

Punches:

Pocket, opener was funny. Not too complex but it landed with impact. Pick Pocket wp rolled off the tongue easily. Multis in the second bar were okay and this bar was more complex than your 1st, seeing how you set it up and kept the shit relevant to the final punch.

Ammo opener was lacklustre. You didn't set anything up and there was no sting to the punch. 2nd bar was better but the wording was all over the place. You don't put your multis in "..", it's where the setups go, unless you doing some Rai-type shit and the multis all connect. Closing bars were kinda like the rest of your verse, unnatural wording and no punches really being set up.

Overall, Pocket took this with a verse that was easy to follow and packed with some witty punches. Ammo had some nice ideas but executed 'em really badly. You gotta make sure ya wording is natural and that you set your punches up creatively.

Fairs in.

SLAUGHTERED DOPE BATTLE BRO WELL DONE GL IN YA NEXT BATTLE