Gi, Ive seen a massive improvement, for the most part your multies were dope but I felt like the "Make it through the year" part was pretty forced. Also, try making your multies and lines leading up to the punch relevent to the punch. Itll help get your setup across alot better, making your punch hit harder. Eloh, though basic with your schemes I feel like your concepts were more creative and you worded your punches alot better.. Overall, Im giving this to Eloh for stronger punches and the more enjoyable read. Fairs in guys

That Matches line though set up beautiful damn. One was more superior here and showed what an average verse of his could do against someone decent .Wouldn't want to see Stack at full strength. Loser had some dope bars as well some multis were inconsistent but he definitely improving