I had to reread both of your verses, and they contained a lot of selfhype.

Winner was a little bit better overall, but you still need to fix your broken multi's. 

Loser's verse was harder to understand than the winner, contained little to no punches, and no captital letters to help me understand where your rhymes were.

Fair's in, good luck.

No H8 but seems to be a no brainer here

FV in

I see.  So we have to use Caps huh.

nice job angel i liked the flow alot for sure

It's all good.  Im still learning how things are done here.  

This was very underwhelming, Dec I felt like you rhymed alright but didn't throw any hard hitting punches at all.. Angel, I feel like your flow was a bit better and you also didn't have any hard hits.. Overall, I think Dec had the more enjoyable read. That's why he gets my vote.

2ND GUY MERCED 1ST GUY END OF STORY THE DELIVERY WAS IMMPECCABLE .... 1ST GUY HAD SCATTERED BARS HARD TO FOLLOW SECIOND GUY WAS TIT FOR TAT WITH RHYME IN THE SENSE THAT IT READ WITH TEMPO AND CONSISTENT BARZZZZ

not really impressed by either

Wasn't a huge lot on this, hard to call. I think Angels bars were possibly more structured and thought out, but dexes flow was smoother and he made the most of the writing space. Mayweather/gara line got it for me. Keep up.