Should be Talk and Swing w Vets. Not Sing l

Winner had good punches, loved the diana bit; the setup was enacted upon really well. Some of it felt a tad bit like a cypher tho, almost like you were selfhyping, and the flow within the first sentence felt choppy. But, you came with constant creative punches.

The loser needs to work on a lot. Honestly felt like a wannabe crip pretending he's a gangsta. Next time don't selfhype, use proper punctuation, capitalize your rhymes and form proper punches.

Fair's in, good luck.

one actually applied himself when formulating a verse where as the other did not seem to take a serious approach to their format.

quite one sided, i do see graddule escaltion in one though and im glad to see more effort on your part, a tip: take notes from the way other people "key" their verses and youll be on your way..GONZOvote

Mehh..one sided affair in this bitch, jk.

Erk all day on this one. Clean wording, nice Multis, creative punches. King felt like it was a cypher verse and very very basic in rhyming and concepts. 

bodied here, Erk came all the way, nice quick scope read. While loser didnt know it was a battle. Too much self hype, not enough attacks. Multies were not capped. Fv

Boi gotta focus on mainstream tongankidd U should know king is the king

Erk had better punches, nothing major, maybe the king get wrecked pun hit hardest but it was light work forreal. King just says stuff, no major creativity or connected rymes just single word rhymes, basic... Erk got this...