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Tongan, I feel like your verse lacked alot of places.. That first line was really stretched.. And the wording behind it made it choppy and hard to get through.. The resr of your verse picked up after that but you still didnt have any wow moments with your punches... Brayne, You stayed consistent throughout.. Good smooth read with some pretty hsrd punches to boot.. Some parts felt like they couldve been executed better though. Overall, Im giving this to Brayne for harder punches and better consistency. Fairs in guys!

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Not a bad read, I felt like TonganKidd had a good understanding of how to set-up his verse, but lacked creatively compared to Brayne. Who had the same well thought out structure, but his flow helped his execution, especially with the inner rhyming helping the bars along, paired w/ the better wording, I got Brayne Ded taking this ultimately -cause his punches hit harder... TonganKidd took a while to reach his punches, and when he did, he didn't set them up well enough to be that lengthy in line count. Brayne Ded did have some misses for me too though, but it wasn't enough to give him and L imo. I can break it down a little more, just PM me if need be. Good battle here guys, fairs in fellas!