LBT shiiiit

"kid he'll get raped, I MIGHT CREEP IN THE FOG." --- ewww lmaoo

if y'all need an expo jus ask

apoc tings, genoa disaster scheme was fukkin g shit, feel like da shit shine especialy wen u cool it wit da 10 sylable multis haha, nice 1 cuz

"No Safety For Young Girls, Like Himself"

Woah, talk about getting burned.

Well, I felt like both rappers were very much at par with each other but I'm leaning slightly towards the one with better punchlines. FV in GB

I actually thoroughly enjoyed this battle, this was a good one, both were at each other's throats.

"Head starts with his simple shit": he's in PRECISION MODE AND THEN CRACKS THA BASICS, gettin shit "down to his own understandin" like REVISION NOTES FA EXAMINATIONS!

Not bad here, but I would just caution that even know I know what you're trying to say (that he's simple/basic and doesnt understand much/needs to simplify to understand things), the way it's worded isn't super clear.

Tag team? man claimed to be "tight; but couldn't cover" like CHEAP WOMEN CLOTHES! YA EXAGGERATED since his partner "reached boilin point without him".. HE'D DRIVEN ROW BUT 'EVAPORATED'!!

What did he exagerate? That thought/sentence is never finished, Just seems like that's shoehorned in there. Punch was decent.

This "child is in need", left on a doorstep; RID, FORGOTTEN THERE so let's "sell Pudsey ta raise some cash for ya" and I'll give a QUID FA 'SPOTTED BEAR'!

Meh, again wording fucks this one up with the Rid, forgotten there, and also the punch itself is just like ehhhh to begin with.

Crew hops with those rabbit legs, you been eQUIPPED THA STRONGEST PAIR, and ever since you've "moved from family to family"... No KIDS IN FOSTER CARE!!

Not the cleverest punch but I mean it ties into the previous 2 lines and the rhyming is pretty good here so good stuff.

Claims tha "bombs I drop; they're predictable", he's right: exPLOSIVE CHARGES, IN CLOSE PROXIMITY, he's "literally runnin on fumes" till he's TOKING CARBONS, 'N SMOKE NOT WILFULLY!

It's just not enjoyable as a reader to be forced to read this. it doesn't flow and "rap" properly at all. Both the amount of syllables in between the multis, IN the multis, and the wording "smoke not wilfully" really makes this a chore. On top of the technical lapses, it isn't a great line.

Seul "exposed his trash flow and poor delivery", Rai felt he BROUGHT THA HARDEST, BUT BRO GOT TIMID, HE said he felt "cheaper than tha bargain bin" and now PLOUGHS HIS GARBAGE.. WITH MORE CONSISTENCY!!

Same story as above, if you have TWO commas within yur capped rhymes there is NO way it's gonna read naturally man. it just seems really forced when read aloud.

His girl left w/ "problems to tha heart" like when Stark BROKE HIS REACTOR! her pussy been on every dick around, men would just POLE IT THEN PASS HER for JOKES 'N SOME LAUGHTER, tried gettin over it, thinkin he'd "cross that bridge later" till he pulled her pants down and saw tha 'GeNOA DISASTER'!!

Night and day here with your last shit, this was the best thing you've said yet man, good job.

Rai's "spellin ain't threatenin", he's supposed to fill me with DREAD, NOT REPLACE NOUNS, guess "being an ugly idiot runs in his family".. Musta been inBRED FROM DEFACED CLOWNS!

Why would his spelling be threatening in the first place? Like why is it an insult for his spelling to be non-threatening? I don't know man. Super duper reachy punch with the clown shit too.

I said look.. What I bring is "made to measure", gonna be SPREAD TOP TA WAIST DOWN, if I make man "go south; and he gets popped" it's not like HEADSHOTS IN CAPE TOWN!!

Sure. I'll take it. I think you're doing better when you're not trying to be as complex with shit and just spitting good shit.

His concept tourney run ended since his 'INSECT KNOWLEDGE IS MINIMAL', think Ant-Man, Rai's "suited to be a pest" but outta RESPECT? 'SCOTT WAS JUS SHRINKABLE'!

Who the fuck is Scott? And again, like when the basis of the set up is "His insect knowledge is minimal", the punch is never gonna be great lmao. I think there was a better way(s) to go about this angle. As is it's not horrific but misses the mark imo.

Like MaCc, he brings "harmless bites" so HIS THREATS? OFTEN INVISIBLE, "showin his mark on my skin?" it's not how Symbiotes 'SYNC WHEN HOSTAGES STICK W/ EM'!!

Alright, pretty good here. Getting a BIG time up and down feel in regards to your consistency in this verse.

Like being sober, his shit "won't give us that buzz", so fuck his LAME VERSES, WHACK WRITTENS AND HIS FUCKIN FAMILY, "going crazy with his obsessions", this inSANE PERSON THAT'S SPITTIN CRAP WHEN LOOKIN BACK AT ME, even beCAME WORSE: A 'GLASS FILLIN MAN DISCUSSIN GRAVITY' after this "DRUNK-cock-had-ABSENTLY RUN-off-tha-BALCONY"!!

Right so the lines here are pretty good for sure, I think the issue with the multis I have is YES they line up count wise and YES they line up sound wise when read seperately, but when you actually read each multi in the way one would in natural conversation, they come off realy dissimiliar. Applaud you for the uber high count multi tho.

Just tha LBT and One Bar, nothin ELSE FA THIS PRICK TA TASTE, I'll take his BELTS 'N THEN KICK HIS FACE, if I got this "Gunner runnin from tha title" I'm not talkin 'EMERICK W/ THA PACE'!! #APOC

Good closer dude, think you ended your verse on some high momentum for sure.

Cont'd

Nobody dreds your solo drops, so don't get it twisted like BRAIDS WHEN IT'S TOO WARM, Or, when the smoke settles, & I let it RAISE out THE COUP DOOR?? "Standing there leaning in a white TANK WITH THE BLUE SHORTS", saying your "Latest Cypher Was A Drag"- WAYNE WITH HIS NEWPORT!! ...

This is hard for sure. Granted, you need to know exactly what yure talking about to really feel it but those that are familiar will rock with it. Properly paced multis and some nice jab(s) in the build. 

Some rated it a 1. Nobody LIKES IT COZ YOU SUCK- whatchu RHYMING ISN'T TOUGH. "So here's your sign, Rebel; FLY IT TO THE FUZZ", & call that motherfucker Khaos, even though nobody "RIOTS" FOR YOUR STUFF!!

That's a jaw breaker.

[*cracks knuckles*] You'd think "Bruce Noland repoted this, with the SOUND THIS ROOKIE MUMBLES". So he'll get "Iced After I Finsh w/no ROUNDED LOOKING FUNNEL" soon as this civilian gets a taste?? he better jot DOWN A GOOD-REBUTTAL, since he's "Bit Off More Than He Can Chew", & we know "HOW THE COOKIE CRUMBLES"!!

It's pretty good for sure, I just think it could have taken a lot less time to get to the point here. I like that you're staying in a controll-able space as far as multi counts and your verse by comparison is coming off so much cleaner.

I cant stand to be around you. MAN STOP WITH THE BICKERING HERE You won't last a day in my cloak, coz "you CAN'T BOX 'SIPPIN LIQUOR & BEER". So when I say you "Don't Have The Will Power...??" It's like "HANCOCK WHEN HIS SISTER IS NEAR"!! (Will Smith)

It's alright, not the greatest thing you've said in the verse so far. Kind of basic.

Someone tell this little kid he'll get raped, I MIGHT CREEP IN THE FOG. Just gimmie some chloroform & a rag, I'll turn this to a "CRIME SCEEN WITH A BLONDE".

That's fucking gay dude LMAO. Not really feeling this one at all.

lb ain't the place for him, his RHYME SCHEMING IS WRONG. There's "No Safety For Young Girls, Like Himself"- SIDE STREETS IN THE BRONX!

I kind of take some points away from this punch because of the previous 2 lines i highlighted that were used as part of the build. It's alright but I mean, why Bronx specifically why young girl/blonde etc etc.

Cheer up, Princess. Brush your HAIR WITH A COMB, coz this "won't be a cinderella story when you take that CHARIOT HOME". I'll fucking strangle you, so prePARE TO GET CHOKED, You'll "Die & Ah Get Wrecked", since there's no "AIR TO THE THRONE"!!(Heir/Diana)

What does it mean that there's no air to the throne? Also, "you'll Diana get wrecked"? Not to mention princess Di bars are some of the most played. This below your paygrade for sure Rai.

Say what, It's Apoc, you're SCREAMING IT, SADLY. HVK fostered you, & I see you've learned a few THINGS FROM YOUR DADDY. Going through puberty at 17. Just to SPEAK OF IT'S NASTY, coz you ain't been "Pro Active On The Spot", since those "TREATMENTS FOR ACNE"!!(Proactive)

Redeeming the last few things which I saw as major stumbles. Good scheme work, concept work, and final bow on it to tie the punch together.

Blood needs to clean his mess up, & I gotta MOP TO LOAN GUY Claims he's "Thorough With His Methods" like HAWK IN 05, but is all around trash w/o seeing a POSSUM GO BY, So It's no wander KG "Cant Hang With Bleu"... "He's been a SLOB HIS WHOLE LIFE"!! (Suwu!)

Actually thought the jab was better than the final punch here. Good work with the rhyming though just didn't think the final punch was hard.

Since you're next to come for the title? I'll emBARRESS YOU WHEN TEXTING SCHEMES spare the rod, spoil the child, it'll never PERISH FROM YOUR MEMORY So for tryna "Take My Belt, You'll Be Whooped Even Harder" like "PARENTS WITH AGRESSIVE TEENS"!!

This line about belts is a bit too obvious imo. Not bad though. Multi seemed a little off, maybe something better suited in audio ro something.

& If Apocolypse is throwing bids on the big screen..?? It's with BARRELS & WARRENT FORMS coz your "Unit Wouldn't Have The Wow Factor", if y'all recruited "DARRELL FROM STORAGE WARS"!!

Pretty good for sure and a good way to end the verse off. But the set up is kind of werid. Why would they throw "warrent" forms on a big screen?

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Overall, I think Rai wins this because he had a couple lines that were simply much more creative than KG, but also because his verse as a whole was more consistent and read much, much better than KG's. KG went for crazy high multi counts and I think it cost him in readibility. KG had moments of creativity but I think he lacked the finesse to craft those ideas into genuine haymakers. Rai stayed at a comfortable multi count the whole way and was fairly strong to start and to end with some stumbles in the middle but not enough to cost him. FV. 

good battle  but ovreall consistency in multi, and concepts took this battle.dimes for 32

Deleted Callaway's vote by request since he's betting on this. I'll be back to vote, props on the 32's

Interesting read... I'll be back. *Arnold Voice*

Without going super in detail, cause this is a 32 and I don't got time to break this shit down by bar. I think KG's inconsistencies got to him here, he had some really nice hits at times, example: Genoa Bridge Disaster, that bit was one of the best pieces of writing I've seen you write KG. You needed a whole verse of those though. I feel like you got decent multi sets, but idea wise, you are forcing alot of stuff. This caused you to have alot of misses in your verse, imo. Rai, on the other hand had more hits, but also had some bars where I thought he coulda' came alot harder in. Starting off w/ that Wayne reference, which was pretty obscure, since no one would know about it unless they watched that specific video, (let alone, remember all the small details from the video) was not a good idea. He picked it up though, but I did notice he had some WP that was pretty bad, also. Now I don't know if I missed the memo, but I am seeing alot of these WP's occuring, and people aren't docking points for them, but I will. Example: You'll Diana Get Wrecked. Jus' doesn't make sense bruh. You are experienced enough to know that they gotta work both ways. Apart from that, he was pretty solid, and had some bars ranging from okay to pretty damn good.

In conclusion, I think Rai takes this off garnering more hits within his verse, and being more consistent which led to a more enjoyable read. Although, the bar that stood out to me most from both verses was KG's Genoa one. Fairs in.

6-7, mid to low.

never write this wall of trash again.. no wants wants to read this bullshit.

8 lines or gtfo... there's no money involved in this.

Jus' so Rai knows I don't hate him xD.

My favourite bar from you was the Pro Active one. <3

1/1 vote deleted

Dope battle.

Closer than I thought it would be.

Always a fair vote. Respect.

Both had serious Double Entendres but Rai won it by being more vicious.

I felt one took it with harder punches.

deleted sicker verses, and KNOWLEDGE vote because they are the same person

This was one sided all the way. No bs. One had creative ideas that were executed poorly.  One took it with quicker and better bars man. Fv in not much tonsay

FV is in.