ignore the "I" before "still" thats a typo.

Saiyan nice bars. 

i mean "i" before "fear". thats a typo. how dwlete my other comment here?

send me 8 exclusive fellas

giving this to Saiiyan for tha more cleaner and better executed verse, punches were real nice and clever too, multis were good and concepts were flipped well in tha setups ... Volcanine's verse was choppy in terms of multis they felt slanted to me, tha wp was really forced too, ideas were good but not executed well so punches didn't land ... fair's in

Volcanine had the right idea as far as structure and set-ups but the execution fell short, I think you could've been more direct with aiming your punchlines at your opponent and toning down the conceptual attacks (glorious destination-hell hole-righteous path). Saiyann was more direct in his approach (Stake in the fight-swept-giveaway). Fair's in fellas.