Dope battle, I like both goku bars being an old dbz fan. 

Both had nice punches and internal rhymes in the opening opening set of bars. I thought it was quite even on the punch count so yet again I’m making my vote based on what I think is the overall more creative choice of rhymes and way they were used, and my vote goes to Rai as he was also more consistently fluid with the way they flowed. Seul I rate highly and I’m sure he knows this, but I thought he was only slightly weaker in this department in this particular battle.

It’s just one battle though. 

Dope reads from both 

Scheme:

- CHOKE YOU WITH YOUR OWN TONGUE

Expo:

- Shoguns are dictators, that own mass territory and have lots of power.

- Animatedly / Play Off Anime / Exicited

- Count Down / Before The Shot is a reference to the starter guns used in races.

- Oh yeah, he lost to Daddio few months back.

idk man, this wasn't very good considering the caliber of these two guys.  There was a LOT of strange ass wording from both.

"Witnessed gropes young," "No pun'll quote this bitch"... 

"bold move, & is so dumb," "orange suit to dart"...

I mean, I saw where it was going with those lines, but the words are awkward and conceptually weird.

Rai's tofu bar took it for me.

Pretty dope battle, I think Rai punched harder in this clash with a nice flow/structure.. Seul you put some imagination behind that written but I also feel like thats what cost you here.. you had long setups and the punch didnt land like it should have.. abit too much of a reach for me but I liked what you were aiming for, Rai you kept it more simple but effective..  Seul, u must mix OLD FOOD W/UR FLOW, SON. Took a loss w/ "Sand, Which Is Bad" like MOLD GREW ON UR LOAF LUNCH!.. that was fire and line of the battle for me. Big points there, closer was nice too.. opener was aight.. GB FV NOH8..

Both keep it together thru out.  I say the punch factor was the case to me here. One was strong wit it. The other had that MM FLO.  Fv in

Got my winner pretty decisively here. Seul it seemed u struggled with the scheme a bit, had some weird multi sets and the punches weren't hitting. Prime example of both is the gropes young line. Not only was it awkward sounding, but the punch didn't completely tie into ur concept. Rai u had a slightly better verse, ur concepts tied into ur end punches well & u didn't have any awkward multis. Nothing amazing but it was enough. Cool bout, leaning this way.

What Alzie said, going with Rai, felt the punches hit harder and Seul was good but I felt like you had too many multi's that accounted as filler. Matrix line was cool. Rai the sandwich and tofu lines were on point.

hey rai any chance  you can spit  true frees if so keen to battle  withor with out beat

Both had some alright punches but some serious flaws in their verses.

Starting with Seul: 1. I've never heard anyone described as having "mass power." 2. There was awkward wording throughout, such as "exposed and witnessed gropes young" (who would say that in a normal conversation?) and "formed two big explosions" (the stress pattern in the last three syllables doesn't match with the previous multi set, unless you say "explosions" differently than I do).

As for Rai: 1. "Took a loss with sandwiches bad" - Awkward as fuck. 2. Most importantly, you were using a different scheme than the one you provided. "BOLD MOVE," "DOME GROOMED," "MOLD GREW," et al., all rhyme with each other, but in what world do they rhyme with "CHOKING ON YOUR OWN TONGUE?" Looks to me like you were using the scheme that Seul posted...

Now, onto the good stuff. I can't find any standout excerpts in either verse, but most of the punches were solid, or at least not cringeworthy. Rai's closer was definitely the best bar of the battle.

Overall, I've got Rai winning with more fluent punches and more solid execution. Fair's in.