nice from my winner, but needs improvement hit me up bro, ya got potential... loser gotta improve by gettin used to tha site, voting on battles an stuff... fair vote...

Winner had the more complex verse all around, not great but it had enough multis, structure and relevant punches to get the W, loser needs elevation-used monosyllabic rhyme scheme, punches were far too basic

Before I vote for the winner, & Explain why, I want you guys to know how I vote, so you're not confused & so u know there is a Method to My Madness... First of all, I have Multiple catogories that I look at & score from 1-10 in.(Punchlines, Multies, Similies, Puns/Wordplay, Counters = Things taken from the other persons verse, turned around, & flipped on them,Overall flow, etc.) After I take everything into account, I then tally the Overall scores, and add 1 point to who I thought wonthe battle right after the 1st read, and choose the Winner. In My ranking system it's virtually Impossible to get a 10, unless someone like Eminem walked in here, because a 10 is virtually a Unicorn, & a 9 is basically a 10. Here is how I score things, & whateach number means to Me. 10: A Unicorns's Verse. 9: Basically a 10/ELITE! Best of the Best. 8: GREAT/Awesome! 7:Really Good! to Borderline Great. 6: Good/Better than Most rappers. 5: Pretty good/Better than the average rapper. 4: Decent/Average. 3: Below average. 2: bad/not good.(basically how good any random Joe Shmo with 0 experience/random kid-teenager would do. 1: Abosolutely Awful!!! (No! No!No! God No! Noooooooo!)Now that you know My criteria, My vote will make more sense and you wont feel bad if you get a 4-7, (Which Is why I needed to explain this the most) because it's not a put down. I didn't want to give a score like that out, & havepeople think that, because Normally people would think those scores are bad, but with My system, that's not the case.So now there's no assuming or guess work, you'll will know exactly what I mean/think for each score. I wanted to do it that way/explain what each number means, because I see a TON of battles on here, where people get scores WAY LOWER than they deserve, & people had no way of knowing if someone gave a low score just because they're Twatts & were hating, or if they really thought the verse was that bad, or if they scored like Me, & the score that looked low really wasn't, & they actually liked the verse.Sorry about the Novel... Now for the votes/The Winner! .

"Botoxic": Try to stay away from simple Lyrics that don't take a lot of skill/cleverness to write, and mostly are just, rhyme... rhyme... rhyme (I'm better, my rhymes are wetter.... Trend Setter...you're lame like a Christmas Sweater, etc.) Try to incorporate more lines that have Double Meanings/Wordplay/Metaphors/Similies/disses, that always end in the Hardest hitting Punch lines that you can think of. I think u have a lot of potential, & with hard/smart work, you can eventually become really really good. Your verse reminds me of exactly how my 1st verses were when I first started writing lyrics, and it only tooka couple years for Me to go from that to a Billion times better than I was. P.S. If either of you want any of My advice on how to do that, Just private message Me & I'll tell you the specific Tips & tricks I used to become way better 10 times faster than everybody else that I knew/know that writes.

"NoT": The bottom of your verse (Mayweather/Botox Lines) made WAY More sense than the rest of your bars, and those lines were a Million times more hard hitting, and better written (Took more skill, more clever) than the rest. If your wholeverse was like those 2 lines you would have won this specific battle Easily, & if you can consistantly write an Entire verselike your last 2 bars, you will be very hard to beat. I went back & forth on who I thought the Winner should be like 20 times. You can Say Botoxic whon because he stayed consistant throughout,& didn't mess up, and/or have stuff that didn't make sense... And you can also say Not Won the battle because it is a "Battle",& he had the hardest hitting punches, & the 2 Best lines. Even though I'm not confident I made the right decision, I have to go with "NoT", because the most skillful parts of the battle came from him, but if I could have voted for a Tie, I would have.  NoT 6.4 (Good-Better than Most) Botoxic 6.3 (Good-Better than Most