Ay slain, get this deleted and send it to me and I'll follow the scheme with ya.. Comment Only
Posted on: 2017-01-27 09:09:21

PHEar slayed Slain Tighter rhyming pattern, better jokes Voted: Schemez / Phenomonon
Posted on: 2017-01-27 12:26:18

Pretty cool seeing both tackling the same rhyme set to see who literally has the better bar structure. I gave it one because the punches were making a bit more sense and there was much more variety in terms of the words used to rhyme each set. The other did alright but again repeated a lot of words in their sets and had difficult maintaining the flow. Interesting one here, FV Voted: Schemez / Phenomonon
Posted on: 2017-01-27 22:36:10

Both stuck with the scheme pretty well even though the pronunciation is a little different from one to the other. One had a higher punch count and a couple creative ideas, some set up better than others. The other's execution had more depth from setup to punch, helping the few he had hit harder. Close, but leaning this way. Voted: Schemez / Phenomonon
Posted on: 2017-01-28 09:51:17

Good battle. Again, my winner made a lil more sense to me as a reader and although i didn't quite understand some of his punches fully, i could still get where he was going with them, which was enough. Quite impressed by his level of skill tbh. Loser came light here but i feel he has more in his arsenal. Fair's in, return the fair one fellas. Voted: Schemez / Phenomonon
Posted on: 2017-01-28 13:04:54